| Reviews for Sea of Sand |
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   feedthegrimmjows chapter 25 . 1/18/2017 Love this fic. Thanks for sharing your talent! |
| Broken Jar Of Hearts chapter 5 . 7/4/2016 NejiTen with InoShikaTem triangle... I like this ;) |
| afaphyte chapter 25 . 9/25/2015 Oh gosh, I don't know where to start. :)) Reading the first few chapters made me feel a rollercoaster of emotions, and I remember wanting to finish every chapter in one sitting. Anyway, how you portrayed Neji and Tenten and the situations between them were utterly heartbreaking that I could empathize with them even though I haven't felt or experienced anything of what they felt. The introduction of the OCs really overwhelmed me at first, but later on they have already grown on me. It's like they're in this intricate web of relationships and emotions that I was a bit intimidated to understand it, but as I continued reading the pieces slowly fit together. How you developed and interpreted the characters from their actions to their thoughts was really something I enjoyed, and I admire you for that. It's not easy to be able to handle real characters and you have even been able to incorporate your original characters. I salute you for that. You really left me with a cliffhanger there, because the NejiTen part was really what I was very excited about. XD But I really really hope you still continue this story, and no matter how long it takes I would still come back to read it. Still, thank you very much for sharing this story with us. :D |
| Riniuchiha chapter 25 . 4/21/2015 I would just like to say that it has been years since you've updated this story and even still I come back to see if you've updated. I have re-read this story countless times and to this day is still my favorite versions of Tenten and Shikamaru. I often read stories hoping to find one as good as this but alas I never do. I won't ask you to update since I'm sure you moved on, I just wanted you to know how I felt. Also thank you for this story! |
| Anonymous chapter 23 . 4/5/2014 Honestly I enjoyed the story but the only part I really interested reading is neji tenten part. I don't like the story ever since there's jou and the others it's too complicated, sorry. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2013 You have absolutely no idea how much I love your stories! They are the beeesssstttt! I wish I could be half as good a writer as you! |
| Lili Bibi chapter 14 . 3/16/2013 Oh yay! They kissed |
| Lili Bibi chapter 11 . 3/16/2013 Kan and Tenten broke up?! Drama! ;) |
| Lili Bibi chapter 10 . 3/16/2013 Wow! Damn! The chap was pretty hot! And Neji, he's jealousss! ;) |
| Lili Bibi chapter 9 . 3/16/2013 Things are pretty complicated for Tenten |
| Lili Bibi chapter 8 . 3/16/2013 The scene in the rain is pretty romatic! I think I like this love triangle! ;) |
| Lili Bibi chapter 5 . 3/16/2013 Neji u oblivious bastard! :( |
| Lili Bibi chapter 4 . 3/16/2013 Lee and his alcohol! Never get old :) |
| Lili Bibi chapter 3 . 3/16/2013 Okay! :( poor Neji |
| Lili Bibi chapter 2 . 3/16/2013 Aww! Kankurou has a thing for Tenten! ;) |
