Love it

The movie is lord of the flies right? Cuz that was a horrible book. Piggy dies in the end, with simon

Loved it

I love this

LMAO! Poor Twobit was so drunk he flirted with a dude! :P

Huh. Loved this, and it's predecessor. Gail had Alzheimers? It's an interesting play on how she lost her memory before. And Drew is actually a good guy! Yay! Great fic.

Sorry that i havent been keeping up with the story. I didnt lose intrest, i just started reading other stories while waiting for you to update. I just got caught up in them. your story was great, a little short, but great.

I hope to have more great stories from you.

yours truly,

Hieislittlewolfdemoness

Why are 99.9 percent of all OC's in The Outsiders Section such HORRIBLE MARY-SUES and are SO OUT OF CHARACTER and SO NOT SET IN THE 60'S (Exactly like this one)!

I mean seriously, girls BARELY wore pants at all except on the MOST CASUAL of occasions. They wouldn't even wear them to school or the movies! They wore sweaters and plaid skirts below their knees, Not low-riders and leather pants and mini-skirts and mid-drif tops or ANY of that stuff! EVER!

And they had nice, simple names like Jane or Sharun. Not Sage, or Blade, or Nickolai, or Willow. And girls NEVER let their hair grow down to their back like 100 percent of these OC's out here. Not unless they were hippies. Plus they all manage to have long black hair and peircing blue eyes. It's a wonder how you can tell any of them apart. And there weren't gothics and emo's and cutters and stuff like that. Totally unbelievable, and just you trying to plug yourself into the story.

And I am so SICK OF YOU PEOPLE PAIRING THESE MARY-SUES WITH GREASERS! That is SO OUT OF CHARACTER! Ponyboy CLEARLY said that he liked girls who wore their hair decently, and their skirts a decent length, who didn't wear a lot of make-up, and didn't swear too much. He practically said that he didn't like greaser girls! So why would he like this girl? Exactly. He wouldn't.

Johnny is SCARED OF HIS OWN SHADOW. He is shy! So why would he just all of a sudden walk up to some horrible excuse for an OC and say. "I love you" and just start making out? He wouldn't. Especially not when he just met her last week. Like most of these horrible stories.

Soda JUST got out of a relationship! He LOVED Sandy! He GOT HER PREGNANT! (And if you didn't understand that after reading the story then you should just give up fanfiction.) He was going to ask her to MARRY HIM. Why if all of a sudden some Mary-Sue showed up, would he just forget about her and fall for her the instant he saw her? Answer: He wouldn't.

Darry barely has time for his own friends from working all the time to care for Soda and Ponyboy. So how could he have time for a decent relationship. The girl would probably be sick of him blowing her off for work or something. Again, totally unbelievable.

And most important of all. And listen closely. DALLY DOES NOT LOVE ANYTHING OR ANYONE. Clearly in the book, it said the ONLY THING HE EVER LOVED WAS JOHNNY. Now, apparently some of you have a problem with that so I'll say it again. THE ONLY THING DALLAS WINSTON EVER LOVED EVER WAS JOHNNY CADE. Not some Mary-Sue who just moved to Tulsa, not Soda's twin sister. Not Johnny's cousin. NO ONE ELSE. He had a burning hatred for Socs, and everything in life because it was so hard on him. So it is totally out of character to have any kind of Dally romace. It's disgusting.

And since all of you Sue-thors have such a problem understanding that. I'm just going to keep flaming until you get it through your skulls. Stories like these SUCK. And only aspiring Sue-thors like yourselves even bother reading past the girl's description because they already know what's next.

Please learn how to write a good fan-fic. Because shit like this puts good books like The Outsiders to complete and utter shame.

-The Plague

omg, i can't believe its actually over...i've been reading about Gail for over a year now...what am i gonna do without her? this is wierd...but i just wanna say, that even tho you didn't update for months, it was worth the wait just to know what happened to Gail and Dally. and may i also say that it was this story that pretty much got me additcted to a DallyOC (and now i'm writing my own lol). i will definetly be checking out your stories in the future! :)(:

YAY! I've never seen the notebook, so I dunno what ur talking bout. Lol :D Anywhho...Yes, I will check out your new story. :P

Hello! Ehh ok maybe that was a short chappy, but the ending was ok! Reminds me of The Notebook which was sad, but at least the ending for this is happy )

Hello again! This chappy took me a while to read, but that's ok cause I was bored anyways. Ahh the beach, I wanna go there! Good chappy, can't wait til the next one! That was a pretty crappy review but I didn't know what else to say lol.

wow! long! but a very fun chapter! i used to get into chicken fights when my cousins still had a pool, it was me and my brother versus my two cousins! man did we have fun! lol anyways have fun on ur trip! update soon! :)(:

love it so munch.I love the hole story

missa :}

wow i like that chapter. the story is so exicting