Wow. Excellent fic. Short, simple and sweet. :)

This is a wonderful fic, and I loved how you explored what it was like for Tobias to be able to be human again, even just for a little while. I really enjoyed it. :)

As a heuuge fan of the T/R pairing, I LOVED this fic.

Altho, maybe the next time, in order to distinguish the thought-speak from the narrative, you could insert them in brackets or italize the words or something. Just a suggestion. _

Magnificent. I thoroughly enjoyed reading that. You finished what KA Applegate left off beautifully. I agree that Tobias got the shaft alot in the series... He and Rachel were my favorite couple, all angsty and stuff. Reading this gives me a sense of completion for them. Thank you so very much! _

Mayhaps you should write s'more Tobias-y bits... I'll be sure to read them. :D

Aw, so sweet! I always thought they should include more in the book... and this was great. Good job!

this was really swet! i'd forgotten Ax had never seen the real Tobias, this is going on my favroites

Aww... so sweet!

Very cool...

I LOVE IT!

BRAVO!

Nicely done! Descriptive and well written! I definately recommend to R/T fans.

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-EARLY