Yay for YPM!

Oh, so you have already continued. That's good. This is good stuff, but I can't believe that Jake is so calm about Aftran's presence in the head of his crush.

Ooh, I spoke too soon! This is great! Please update as soon as you can! I like this, and I'm looking forward to more!

yah-huh! coolies!

love this!

you've just done this so well!

MORE SOON!

You know that Cassie morphs dragonfly in the middle of #21, right?

Dragonflies are smaller than Aftran, so would Aftran morph along with Cassie in that case?

I'm not even gonna bring up the Biology Lesson incident in #24, or the sharks in Marco's bloodstream in #42...

Good chapter. Like the last line.

I like the title. Very nice.

So this story will be centered on Aftran? She seems to receive a lot of attention in FFN, but I like that, because it adds variety here, and I like it when writers at FFN elaborate on issues and incidents otherwise mentioned more briefly and vaguely by the real authors of the books.

THIS IS MY WORK!

he... no its not... just kidding!

this is so cool!

i like the line 'and three, we have to keep marco from figuring out he IS an idiot'

good one!

was that in the original?

WHEE! MORE PLEASE!

nice job, good thing I saw this...thought it was on my story alert list. Well, now it is. :)

cool! Nice! wicked!

i love alternate stories...

KEEP IT UP!

Nice job. I honestly didn't think you'd have a problem with my putting your story in a community. I'm not sure why there's anything wrong with it...it's just an additional link, it's not as though I uploaded the story again or anything. Please email me if you have any concerns.