| Reviews for In The Darkness |
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Umi chapter 24 . 10/27/2017 I like the story, but not so much the significant redundancies between chapters...but like the story. |
gothangelp3 chapter 33 . 8/7/2016 Please update this story! I want to know what happens! |
Guest chapter 33 . 2/25/2016 Wonderful story and very creative. Looking forward to the update. |
yrs truly chapter 33 . 12/19/2014 To be honest, the story was good to begin with but then just got worse and worse. So much repetition, needless vulgarity, terrible use of prose and descriptive language. The characters were not developed well enough. In your quest to create an angst filled, fluffy novel you instead created a smutty and quite disappointing fic. I'd suggest a rewrite of this fic, the plot was quite nice and shouldn't go to waste. Au revoir |
phantomoftheopera199 chapter 33 . 2/9/2014 I really like this story please update |
alice1239 chapter 33 . 5/3/2012 loved the chapter ... hope draco does not fine out ... :D |
Lovers in London chapter 33 . 9/20/2011 OMG THERE BETTER BE MORE! Am loving the story btw :) 3 |
Veritas Aeterna chapter 29 . 5/21/2011 okay, normally I'm not picky... However, Juliet drank a sleeping aid to make it look like she was dead and then Romeo killed himself with poisen (not knowing the plan for them to be together). After he was dead Juliet woke up saw him and promptly killed herself with his dagger. So, I'm sorry, but that was slightly irritating... I like Shakespeare and don't want people to be mislead. Especially when people today wouldn't take enough time to read it properly. Again, I apoloize for my outburst. I have enjoyed the rest of your story and really hope you get the chance to write/update more. |
love109 chapter 33 . 9/17/2010 plz say ull update i so want to see what happens next |
Uchiha Riddle chapter 33 . 12/11/2009 Keep writing! |
thetexasmama chapter 33 . 10/11/2009 Just started reading this fic this weekend and I finally am all caught up! Great fic! I'm very interested in where the "relationship" between Hermione and Harry is going. Perhaps from Harry's perspective? Maybe things aren't as platonic from Harry's end of things? That would be interesting... |
jemovampiress chapter 33 . 8/14/2009 you really really need to finish this story! it is undescribably wonderful! |
FugitiveFantasy chapter 6 . 7/8/2009 I just realized that u never completed this story. I really hope u will update it one day. |
FugitiveFantasy chapter 5 . 7/8/2009 I really like this story I find very entertaining. The phantom of the opera thing goes well with the story. I'm favoriting it :) |
dreamanddie chapter 33 . 5/27/2009 Hi, wow I know this is late but I used to wait for your chapters to come out. xD I lost interest in all reading for a while and I recently decided to reread all the fanfics I used to obsess over and I have to say I still think you're a fantastic writer. I really wish this was finished (and I hope maybe someday you will) but I'm okay reading this over and over. _ 3 ~: Dream :~ |