| Reviews for Fugue |
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SummerSnowflakes15 chapter 1 . 3/8/2010 Wow... I have only read the first few paragraphs (cant read the rest... its getting late) and I am amazed. You capture the Titans better than anyone, that I know of. I am so, so amazed with this story... |
PhoenixClaw chapter 19 . 9/13/2009 I DIDN'T FORGET TO REVIEW! I just got...sidetracked with life...or something... But damn was it a good read! Gotta love the image of RadioShack vomiting it's inventory and Cyborg making a comment that would make Beast Boy balk in horror. I wonder how many aliens answer the male/female question as 'neither' or 'both'? Gotta say, loved how you gave 'Shadow' the most blatant rip-off of every half-rate superhero all crammed into one. XD All in all, I like the 'filler episode' quality of this chapter. It was a relaxing time for both the heroes and the reader. Looking forward to chapter 20 already! _ |
Iliana Racquel chapter 19 . 9/7/2009 This story is really well written, and a fantastic read! I was slightly confused with the issue with Mad Mod, but you explained it after, so now I get it. I just have to say that how you actually weaved the confusion of the Titans into your writing was something I have never seen before, and it was really amazing. Keep writing! |
kobez2.0 chapter 19 . 9/5/2009 Excellent update, you'veobviously put alot of thought and effort into your work. I just hope you don't make us waitsolong fo the next update. Peace. -Kobez- |
kakaner chapter 6 . 8/10/2009 I really liked the insight into Robin at the end- it's true... he really is the only masked one! I wonder- do the TT actually see him with it of ever? this was a crazy chapter! I also just realized that this entire fic is 117,0 words... THATS A FREAKING NOVEL! anyway, great action... im kinda confused by mika's power.. but all in due time |
yyssw chapter 5 . 8/4/2009 WAI no wai! That was kinda quick of them to mention a place on the team... I thought. But anyway, Starfire was adorable as always! I wanna learn more about her past too |
kakaner chapter 4 . 8/2/2009 ! cliffhanger! I wonder when the TT are actually going to have to confront Mika... Once again... I spy research! Well done D |
kakaner chapter 3 . 7/30/2009 Haha! clever chapter name The amount of research that went into this chapter in particular is quite impressive- diesel fuel chemistry, really? Are you a chemistry major or something? Another exciting chapter! I really feel like I'm watching TT S6... if only... |
kakaner chapter 2 . 7/28/2009 Favorite quotes: "Open wide, dearie, this will only hurt for a business cycle or two!" It was hunt or be hunted. And I totally hunted his sorry butt.” Aahh... I can totally hear their voices in my head! I gotta say, you've totally got the characters down pat. Also, did you know "trust no one" is the X-Files mantra? Anyway, I really liked this chapter! I laughed so many times... you really did a good job making it read like an actual episode. On to read more D |
DevilDogOFmadness chapter 18 . 5/15/2009 I like this story and look forward to seeing this story completed. Please don't turn this into another one of those half completed stories that never gets done. |
SushiChica chapter 18 . 5/13/2009 I just randomly jumped back in with this chapter, which I don't have the time to take in fully but I skimmed here and there, and I came to the conclusion that I need to start reading this again. Still you are, and forever will be, my hero. Your writing, as always, is intriguing, original, and nothing short of wonderful. -Sushi |
PhoenixClaw chapter 18 . 5/13/2009 I'm not dead, dammit! I simply happen to have a full time job(High school math teacher!) and regrettably don't have the time to write stories at the moment. T_T ... Err, rather, I'm assuming that Author's Note comment was directed at me. Maybe you have a fourth person reading? :P All kidding aside, your writing style is one of the most unique and engaging I have ever seen. You need to seriously think about becoming an author and publishing things. Just to give you an idea of how good this really is, I can tell you in all honesty I literally threw all my other responsibilities to the side when I saw this update in my e-mail. Some time later, I found myself satiated after gorging on this terrific chapter. I swear, tabbing stuff out to create a standard dialogue -and- an inner monologue at the same time? I NEVER would have thought of that. I'd also suggest to italicize the inner monologue bits for extra emphasis, but that's me. _ Oh, and the final little snippet where you break the fourth wall and toss all the elegant writing right out the window? Friggin' epic. I never would have seen that coming, and you're a total bastard for the "But wait, I promised there would be no more experimentation in the near future!" anti-lemon line. XD Why the hell do I have to be so positively influenced by the really good authors? *Sigh* Now I feel compelled to try and write something again... Best of luck on the future chapters, and it was nice to FINALLY 'meet' you via the Author's Note. :D |
Universalperson chapter 18 . 5/13/2009 Hey, you have an audience right here. It's very hard to make a good OC. You're doing a great job with this. |
yyssw chapter 1 . 5/9/2009 Congratulations on a strong first chapter! I like how you've pinpointed all the Titans' habits and dialogue patterns. You also hit the narration spot on- I felt like I was watching an actual episode unfold between playful banter at the tower and fight sequences. I smell a great, epic plot setup! There's plenty here to keep me coming back for more- even if there are hints of OCness... |
Lawn Trout chapter 16 . 7/22/2008 Stylish as ever, but this new chapter needs a review. I know the feeling of wondering why nobody offers up feedback. So there. Using format to increase the tension at the end Winner. Well done. |