That is really sad. It totally could have happened.

So awesome! Oh my gosh, I never thought of Remus that way! It is so descriptive and so well written that it just draws you in! Keep it up!

Mrs. Black

how is it, that whenever i really get into one of your stories and start to tear up, not only my heart aches but my arms and my fingers do too?

Aww, Remus. :(

That was excellent.

BEAUTIFUL! completly beautiful. It brought tears in my eyes. the way you wrote it is awsome and your story line is original. I love it.

your description of the characters and their feelings really touched my hearts. Great job!

How sad! But I liked it... I've never thought in this way... In Remus loving Lily forever... Actually, it's strange for me thinking about them as a couple. I love the shipper J/L. I've already read some fics where Lily and Remus are dating, but they always broke, cause she loves James... But everyhting ends ok, always. Never in this way... It's different and sad, but I liked it.

Mimi Granger.

That was awesome. You made me cry.. But only coz it was good.

That was sad. When I first started reading, I thought the person was Snape, but then, like right before you said who it was, I realized that it was Remus.

I'd have to say that my favorite part of this whole story is how much Lily actually loved James. I'm a sucker for anything romantical *bats eyelashes*

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But she still seemed like Lily. Still had a goofy grin, still thought everything was about her.

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I liked that too. Great job, this story was really good )

xoxox

J

So sad, you almost made me cry...:-(

But it was really well written!

Oh. That was gorgeous. Long for you, but still gorgeous. The italics and bolds are very poignant and strong. Great emphasis. A beautiful insight into my favorite character. Great job.

Huffah and mad props to you,

Ta~

*Austin

This is so sad. It's written very eloquently, and very beautifully. However, it is heart-felt and touching. I'm left feeling really sad.

Tania

That was pretty good. I do have to admit that you almost had me there. In the beginning, I thought the story was about James or Sirius, but when you mentioned the bite...well, lets just say that I had to look back into my Marauders history. 'Cause, I knew James wasn't bitten by a Lycanthrope, and neither was Sirius or Peter. I knew that Remus was, but maybe you were chaning it just for kicks? Took me a while on that one.

Anyways, I have a request for you. Please stop writting so many different storys. Pick one or two story's that you've started adn finish them, then move on to another. If you get a good idea for a starter, make sure that you can somehow incorpurate that into a different story. I'm sure that I'm not the only one bugged by this, because my friend reads your's as well and its getting on her nerves.

That made me cry so much by the end of that story. It was so sad. I love the way, and everything that you write. Keep on going!

-starsoverlilynjames

Brilliant, as always. I love how you write. ~ *huggles you*

Wuffs,

~silver emerald eyes

My goodness you're really good at this - leaving people heartbroken at the end of your stories.

-Kimberly-