That fic was amazing, no wonder it has so many reviews! Please continue making fics like this, you have talent :)

Of all the story i read, i love how yours feels different :)
Instead uncontrable excitment, i can feel so content of the story ending, i'm simply loving every bit i read on your story and when it comes to and end, i surely want to read more
But i'm also content to read the end of your story, truly perfected for only your story and suited better than most of happy ending i encountered :)
You make such a realistic bound of two teenager who grown up more than they are supposed to be, and how they just enjoy what they had and awaited what happened in the future, and will proceed from there
And i really love jounouchi quote about "change"
Anyhiw, i really love your story,
I really cannot wait to read another yours
And sorry for rambling :)
Thnk you for such a good work :D

Wait-THAT'S IT?! REALLY?! THAT'S IT?!

So, what relationship they have?!

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Oh well... It's still great fic...
How they developed their relationship was quite unexpected... They really goes with flow...!

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And honestly... The sex scene was amazingly beautiful and sweet... No rough and rush... And they both conscious...

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Oh well... I guess it's an okay then... #shrugged and smiled weakly

Nice fic! ;)

I loved it, I have never read such a passionate lemon as yours, I have always pictured them saving it rough, like angry sex ( not that I don't like reading that) but I loved this so much. I cant find the words I'm looking for, im speach less. This lemon is just perfect.

enjoyed your fic. in the end, they decided to hang onto the friendship that they grew into. :)

Nice fic i loved it
Friendly darkmoonlady

Stop saying goodbye, i think i'm gonna cry TT ( did that just rhyme ? O.O )

Well, anyways, what I wanted to say is that when reading something good I really...Y'know, the characters really grow on me...And when it ends it's like Death Note all over again.

MY POINT IS: I liked this story. A lot.

really nice story. had much fun reading it. thank you~

Quite an impressive improvement in writing from the beginning of this fic to this chapter :D There's seldom spelling errors. If only the characters' actions seem more rational.

Oooh, some action~! Though I can't see any reason for it :/ The lack of security in the building is still nagging me.

I think the organization of your chapters would be neater if you added lines or a sort of break between scene changes. Not so much for the fact that it's hard to understand but it's difficult to adjust. I wanted to know how big the basket is to fit such a giant dog. I can't visualize it XD

By the way, in the first chapter, how did Jou run half a mile in ten minutes without breaking a sweat infront of Kaiba. Well, at least, it wasn't mentioned. Might want to consider how each character feels and include the details that come with each thought.

Woah, woah slow down and think, maybe? Too many plotholes. First off, I'm pretty sure Jou tore off his collar and didn't put it on again. Second, how about Jou's family? His dad would at least notice him one for a day, well, at least if he wasn't an uncaring drunkard some authors depict him as.

Does Kaiba only have one appointment a day? The time is all messed up and vague. The specifics are sincerely lacking. Although I simply love the little arguments they have and their character is pretty accurate, the writing needs to be refined, as in grammar and spelling.

Your claim to be obsessed with the real, cold Kaiba doesn't seem to be too true. Why was there so little security in KaibaCorp's headquarters anyway? His employees are the cold, bitchy ones xD Not too professional, are they. I wish you added more emotion into the story, along with more details of the surroundings to clear it up. Can't wait for the meant of the fic though. How I love slave-fics.

Aww cute _%

Very intimate, love it :)