You're not going to finish this story, are you?

I'm really loving this story, it's great! Your writing style flows so nicely. I look forward to more! :D

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XD Ohh~ I lurve this fic D Ish great~

Aw D...Sheena forgot about him... X3 I can't wait to see if/how she rembers him again Hehe D Please update soon~

oh I love this chapter :3

I can't wait until you finish it o

I love that, lol. Poor Sheena, being tortured by Kuchinawa like that. Wasn't Kuchinawa the older brother o.o? Or maybe I'm just incorrect. xD Keep writing, please!

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*Throws self on floor* *Apologizes repeatedly ala Sae Sawenoguchi*

Serene: *Sigh* Here we go again *Charges Pulse Bomb* *Throws bomb*

*Gets hit out by bomb X_X*

Ow...Alirght, alright, I get it. :P

Eh, sorry about that stupid blurb above. XP I knwo this is massively late and I really don't have much of an excuse. Better late than never they say, but even this is too much...

In any case, it's still a treat getting to read this. _ Short yes, but still excellent I thought. I was wondering if Seles was acutally going to appear in this story rather than mentioned. Now if only I can stop imaging her voice sounding like Anita from ROD TV. _

I also understand about you needing to find how you're going to get where you're going. That's actually one reason I haven't started that Haibane Renmei fic yet. I know how to start and what the destination is, but I don't really know what roads to take yet. All in good time though, right?

As always, great work, Zelda Master! _

Man, Seles gets on my nerves. I think she gets on everyones nerves haha. This is one AWESOME story I really hope you continue this. Why does Seles think that Sheena is a witch? She had to leave! It wasnt her fault! Anyway great chapter! Cant wait to read the rest! Latterz.

Hoo-RAY! An update!

I really liked the exchange between Sheena and Seles. Seles is such a great character!

I hope you do/did well on your paper.

Yay new chapter! Keep writing, please!

Ooh... I like this story. It's a really interesting take on how Sheena and Zelos knew each other. And now Seles has been mixed into the picture. Somehow, I'm hoping Sheena and Zelos have at least a slighly happy end (the real-time ones) but, of course, it's your story and you can do what you want

Keep it up! Please don't give up on it! I REALLY want to see where this goes.

Update soon!

Love the story! It definetly puts things in perspective. Poor Zelos doesn't even know that his Sheena now knows all his family's dirty laundry. What's a Chosen to do? Hope you update soon cause I can't wait for the inevitable confrontation that will rise between the Chosen and ninja where she spills the beans. I know I'm just ranting but another thing, how does all this relate to their situation now? Did Kuchinawa once love Sheena? So many questions that can only be answered by you. So please, don't rush the story but update soon. Much love,

~Faye

Sorry I took so long to leave a review for the chapters I've not reviewed so far. I really like the style that this is written in, it works so well. What happens and Sheena's emotions seem somehow very right/in-character. Perhaps Zelos becomes even more cynical and doesn't allow himself to become really close to other women later on because of the dissappointment of having Sheena taken away from him?

What a wonderful story! I was so intrigued by you story that I read all the previous chapters as well! I love the way you write! Especially in 1st person! I want to learn how to write like you too! It's a pity you don't have much inspiration, because I really want to know what Sheena does to solve her problem. If I could only be like you and keep my commitments for chapter stories. Don't give up on this story! *favs*

I know that you joined the Sheelos C2 thing, so just know that if there you want any ideas for inspiration, we're there.

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