| Reviews for Snow White and the Seven 'Dwarfs' Sort of |
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youll never know chapter 46 . 10/19/2016 This better not be one of those steriotypical books where the main characters dont kiss til the end... I will leave such a bad review it will be outlawed. SERIOUSLY inukag starved here |
YummY-FrencH-65 chapter 12 . 8/26/2015 ...this is more like Cinderella than snow white _ |
EeveeGirl23 chapter 62 . 7/19/2015 I loved this story so much! The ending was so sweet and I'm glad everybody was happy in the end. I was crying a little on how sweet the ending was. They all went though so much :,) amazing story I've read in a long time! Thank you for making this. |
MixBerkaan chapter 25 . 10/22/2014 I really enjoy your story, though there is one consistent grammatical error I've noticed (I sort of figure you've learned this, too, as your most recent stories don't exhibit it if my memory recalls correctly. However, just in case, you want to be using "Would have" or "Would've" and not "Would of" I really hope I don't come across as a pretentious asshole. I just want your story to shine in all aspects because you're a good enough writer that it deserves to. |
GaarasBloodRose chapter 44 . 9/10/2014 I KNEW IT! I knew with the way she was acting, that Soten was being disloyal. Oh, Soten, why?! Your own brother! *Sobs* I was really hoping I was wrong... |
Priestess chapter 12 . 7/30/2014 Sutras. They're called sutras. |
Babethetacostho chapter 62 . 5/21/2014 OOOhhhh that was lovely, I loved it! I wanna see Midoriko and Nobunuga! Thats sad that seshy is selfish |
KAIRI chapter 47 . 4/27/2014 TOO MUCH F'N RIN! |
KAIRI chapter 24 . 4/26/2014 damn! when is inu gonna find kags already!? : ( |
Jay chapter 62 . 3/27/2014 Wow. I reviewed the other day when I was about half way through, and it just kept getting better. I know this was your first story, but I was more captivated than I have been by a lot of long time writers. I loved the inspiration & plot twists, I wasn't able to guess every detail which was exciting. Your incorporation of so many characters was great! Kagura & Hiten actually make a really good match, I'm glad someone suggested it to you. Constructive criticism side of me: Besides needing some editing, mostly spelling, this story was very well written & you should be extremely proud of yourself. I'd have reviewed every chapter, but when you have 62 to read, it's a little difficult. Now, I'm off to read more of your works. |
Guest chapter 39 . 3/25/2014 So, I haven't commented yet, but I'm truly enjoying this story. I love how you have been incorporating all the characters. I don't know if you set up the way Seven walked around the horse with a purpose, but it made me smile because you had the monk on one side of Rin & the thief on the other like her devil & angel on her shoulders. |
EnderCatWarrior chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 Hi. ok ther i started... I just want to thank you... so so much... u changed my life... i read this story many months ago and im just now reviewing. but for a reqlly good reason. before, when i found this, i had never heard of InuYasha.. i had been looking for just a Snow White fic. but, i started reading this and got instantly hooked... durring reading, i looked up InuYasha, and found the episodes on youtube... agin. hooked. YOU introduced my now FAVORITE show to me. you. YOU YOU YOU! and i love you for that ;3; i would have never known inuyasha (well not at this point in life) without you... THANK U SO MUCH :D |
HelleBelle chapter 62 . 11/25/2013 The best rendition of "Snow White in the seven dwarfs" I've ever read! |
HelleBelle chapter 46 . 11/24/2013 Is that a big enough sign for you Sango LOL? |
HelleBelle chapter 41 . 11/24/2013 Oh kami LOL |