This short story was interesting. It was short but deep (instead of sweet). I enjoyed it nonetheless (yes that is an actual word. Can you believe it? I can't, it's funny really.) I know you most likely won't be seeing this, seeing as this story was uploaded 2005. Or you might, I don't know. You could be still on this site. If so, you are very loyal. April 23, 2005 the day my (ex) best friend was born. Wow how amazing. I say ex as if I hate her, but no. I love her. She was my happiness. I am one year older than her, even though I treated her like she was five. I should have been more grateful that I had her. I... wasted her. How did your story bring me to talk about this? Oh! I know, April 23, 2005. What a great day. I guess I took this chance to ramble about her... mostly because you probably won't see this. So why not get it out? Its good to let go of things... even if it mentally kills you for a while, maybe even forever. You see... she is the type of person that can do that. Give you a great friendship, and when its over, you're completely heartbroken over it. I denied my true feelings about the situation, but I can't live without her. Wow... that really hit a spot in me. I'm sorry for this.

Wow, I didn't think a couple sentences about an apple would be so good.

wow.

That was amazing good, I'm not even joking, it was short, but really nice

Nice. I liked the part with the apple will remember...

Wow, so that's what she thought when she bit into that apple...

I like this.