I am really enjoying this story, is there any chance

of any new updates? It is getting really interesting.

I really enjoy this story. Please update soon.

I've read all chapters now and I really like this story. I hope you will go on, it's more that you have to go on! Did a great job!

This has been really sweet so far. The chapters sure are short but I don't mind too much, it's ok this way too.

Those last two chapters were really good! I loved the way Jack is all protective with Michelle! And the reunion between Tony and her was sweet, with the little hint about the problems to come... Update soon!

i love this, but the chapters need to be longer. you could almost group them all together to make a full chapter. but i do love your writing.

i really love this. so amazing and heartfelt

This is really well written... I really like it! I hope Michelle doesn't sign the papers

this was good, i was shocked when tony said that to her tough. but i suppose he is just looking out for michelle. keep going, it's still great.

Loved it! I think it's your best chapter to date. Michelle's nightmare is particularly well described. Update soon!

Very well written! It had great atmosphere. Really touching and sad. I loved it! I hope you'll update soon.

I really enjoy this story. Please update soon.

that was pretty good, kinda short, but still well written. are you going to continue with it?

It's a great start. I hope to read more soon!

mariska