I could have sworn that the last time I read this story that there was more to it. Did you delete other chapters? Am I being ridiculous because it was a looooong time ago and I don't actually remember? Anyway, I'm so excited to see where this goes and how the dragon they bring along contributes to the story. Update soon?

Awesome! Glad this is still alive.

"When I start something I intend to finish it" Does that include another story? A story involving transformations, giant robots in disguise, a twisted love story?

I feel like I've seen this chapter before.

Robin, you shouldn't curse at the individual who is taking the situation with gaining powers more seriously than you are! I mean, it's important, man!

*Snickers quietly to self*
You can't just RUN AWAY from destiny, Robin! Have you NEVER played the Legacy of Kain series? Don't you remember what happened when /Raziel/ tried to run away from his destiny? You know, his destiny to be trapped inside the Soul Reaver for all eternity? He eventually HAD to do it IN ORDER to SAVE Nosgoth! Or the time where Raziel refused to kill Kain? He eventually did that anyways too! In short, have this heavily modified quote:
"Your futures are predestined –
Raven's was foretold when she was born. We each play out the parts fate has written for us.
Free will is an illusion."
Original quote by Kain, Soul Reaver 2

I like what you did with malchior. I always thought he was a good, but a waste of a character. The story is amazing and I hope you update.
PS: I like the fact you did not jump to sex on like chapter two or three like most other fics would, lemons are OK I guess but for me it needs a good well written build up, "not a hi robin" "oh hey rave" they start having sex scene...you did a good job story wise and you captured their personas perfectly

WOW! This is great! I absolutely love it. I hope you continue with this story:)

Oh! This is so GREAT! I NEED MORE! I would like more. You're a fantastic writer, I hope you continue this story.

I love your story I really hope you finish it one day for now I'll wait can't wait for the next chapter

May we meet in the halls of Vahala

Please come back and continue

As nice as an update would be, I can accept the low chances of that happening.

Did you just imply his masturbation? I'd love if you updated... I am well aware you probably won't. I just wanted you to be aware of how much I love your writing.

I can almost sense you aren't going to finish this. I loved this story. It brings tears to my eyes knowing it will forever be incomplete

Wow this is wonderful! Absolutely beautiful!