this is a great story and I love the charters you had added in. I wish they could live in SH!

Awesome chapter! I had always thought those two scenes with rory in the dress and jess in flannel would be perfect and it was. thanks for writing it.

WHOA! Casey wants hi to take the kid? that's huge! jess better say ye, he'd be a great dad. plus, rory could help him. ugh, i hope he says yes!

i have never even considered what would happen if rory wasn't w/ dean when jess came untill i read this, and now i'm kicking myself for not thinking of it! i love ths story, i've already read it like 4 times, but i wanted 2 read it again!

Rose,Rose,Rose,...sofar so good...my take on this is that Rory and jess new alot about eachother a little too quickly and lorlai apparantly lUVS to call rory sweets...this is my take on this...O & btw the story has bewitched me and all i want to do is read it omg...luv ya..

-Alice T. W.

Rose i havent read this story yet but...I'M GOING 2 AND YOU KNO IT!

-Alice...aka...srgdancer

Rose, no! I loved this story with all my heart! Oh well, you did a great job with it while you could.

Smiles,

Mary

i was boredd and just browsing Literati fics. Just wanted to praise you on how good of a job you did. I really enjoyed and im sorry writing is not calming to you anymore! But thanks for what you did. I really enjoyed it!

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Can't believe Rory'd agree to that...

But...They DID use protection, right?

It wouldn't do to screw everyone's lives up now that it was going so perfectly because two teenagers were being idiots.

While the concept of the story is good, I just think there is too much drama added. I also think the characters are way ooc (as you said they would be). Dean is too much of an ass, Rory needs to be a little less hysterical, and Jess needs to be more of the sarcastic hoodlum we all know and love. I can usually handle minor changes in the characters' personalities...but I guess not in this one.

So, even though the out of character-ness was expected it just made the story less enjoyable for me. But, there were moments (i.e. the scene when Jess agrees to go with Rory for her "coming out".) All and all, it would have been better if executed differently, in my opinion. However, who am I to say something like that when I can't even write a decent story myself?

Rose, where are you? I am very dissapointed in you young lady. Update soon so I can review. Oh, and tell me how I can improve my story Start Over, cause I want to get some Tristan in, but make him not too jerkish.

Mary

so great! write more!

I love this story and what a good ending...how do you get to the live journal thingy?

~MGS

update soon.

Hey Rose! I love it! Jess is being mature! Emily actually likes him. you finally got Luke and Lorelai together. Too bad if they get married Rory and Jess will be step-cousins. Anyways, update soon.

Hey,

Great chapter. update soon.