I personally think the endings cute. Not OMG KAWAI~! cute but still cute. Irvine not wanting to move and Squall kinda hoping he doesn't get an earful... And really good writing

I like this story. You did well. I hope it continues. It was kind of disconcerting reading Irvine with an accent when he didn't really have much of one in FFVI, but I understand why you did it.

Nice story.. you described sniper's heavy burden with a nice way.

that was good.

the only crit i have is that the southern thing bothered me through the whole story.

but it was very well done :]

UM MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE? GOOD GOD I LUV THIS STORY. i'm all about the angsty romances! keep going lol _

*squeals* How cute! Aw! Hm... I have to say I couldn't stand the Southern accent. it was just the I's being Ah's that drove me crazy *sweatdrop* Totally stupid, I know, but it just did.

Anyway... off of that... it was really good. Good descrption and emotion, and the scene was very well dialogued and Irvine's whole story was interesting to read. Yay Irvine/Squall *gushes* They're my fave, we need more of them! The beginning was hilarious because you could understand their awkwardness so well, and well, wondering where it was leading. I think the rating for this could be T though, cause there was nothing graphic or anything.

Good job!

Ohh, I liked this a lot :) The portrayal of Irvine I thought was especially good; the accent suits him. Will there be any continuation of this one? *hopeful* Great work, though, well done!

I really liked this fic and I look forward to the sequel, whenever that comes. The southeren accent kinda worked for me, but not entirly. I loved all the gun related details in here. One of the thing I really like was how the author really got into Irvine's and Squall's heads, I felt that a lot happened when all they did was sit in a room and talk.

That can't be the end! I need to know what happens when they wake up! I loved this fic! It was wonderful! Please write more to it!

I don't remember Irvine using so many 'ah's' in place of 'I's', but the story is good.

Great fic, though Irvine's accent seemed a little ott. Anyway it was really well written.

Woo-hoo! So like, totally well worded, ya know? Hehe. Vey creative and original. And I loved the ending. It was just so sincere, and it didn't bother me that Irvine was, uh, kind of semi-puff, just the way you but it. I usually makes me mad because I LOVE KINNEAPOO!

great story, should have a sequal, keep up the good work

I like it! Irvine x Squall fics are so cool! But I really don't like Irvine's accent. It's a little 'too Southern.' Other than that, fabulous!

This is a very sweet and very well written fic. It's nice to be able to read a fic and feel like your getting inside the characters heads and as if you understand everything that they are going through. I really liked the turmoil that Squall was going throught too. I usually don't like SquallxIrvine but this one was really good and I didn't suffer at all while reading it.