Wow what an awesome story! I read from beginning to end in three days! Hope u are well and update soon! It was nice to know u still among the living in 3/2014 and hope u still are -_- lol a new fan IMA follow and review from now on! :D

This story is simply amazing! It sinks in seamlessly with the game, and the Malak/Revan history is so perfect. I can't believe I've run out of story to read! It's just too excellent! Hanging on your every update :)

oh this is turning out to be a good story. Please continue!

Oh man i just got done reading this whole story again and it is still as good as the first time i read it ...actually better. So keep up the good work and don't give up.

I thought this chapter was really good and you should keep going.

Update soon! Can't wait to see the rest!

Once again your flashbacks are wonderfully written. You could do an entire story detailing the past of Revan and Malak they are so interesting.

Interesting. What will happen next?

Ack, sorry it took me so long to get to these! PoorJuhani! I wonder what happened to Mission.

Revan really is sneaky and manipulative here. Poor Malak never stood a chance.

awesome! keep it up _

I like your story, but your characterization of Malak... :shakes head: Malak wouldn't be accused of being a visionary but he isn't stupid in the sense of having a low I.Q. He may be brutish and clumsy in his strategies but he is certainly cunning enough to usurp Revan (who if not for Bastila would be dead), and keep his rowdy dark jedi at bay while he ruled.

From what I picked up in kotor 2, he was definitely intelligent enough in the ways of persuasion (something he proved in kotor1 by turning Bastila). And his accent hints that he is arrogant (something the Exile mentions) and probably a bit of a smart ass.

Aside from that minor qualm the story is good.

Wow that was just amazing. you are VERY good at writing your was so good and I ended up reading 1-32 in a few days. I just couldn't stop. Keep writing.

I can't really call this a genuine review since I haven't read a complete chapter-I had exactly ten minutes to kill and began skimming through your fic. I found some incredibly wonderful moments that were seriously well done, and some turns of phrase that were just wonderful.

I happened upon the Malak/Revan sex scene and thought you did a masterful job of portraying their relationship dynamics and the power struggle that came about. Then, two chapters later, Revan tells him how he hurt her, and her decision that he would always be near her to witness her victories and forever stand in her shadow was just brilliant. It made perfect sense and just *works*.

From a brief read of the first chapters and then the last, it seems as if your fic has become much denser and the themes more subsantial.

So, why am I writing this? Because I think this fic probably deserves a zillion reviews, so I wanted to drop you a line to tell you that your writing is terrific and that I'm going to tackle this big monster of yours. Just slowly... ;)

Cheers,

Trillian

I love your story so far, I'm only on chapter 12, but I'm getting there, and I'm sorry I did not review till now, I was printing off most of your chapter on my comp. so this is prob. the first time I have read any of it online, fantastic job

You can't leave me hanging. What happened to Mission? Did she get hurt from the grenade?