| Reviews for Promises of Tomorrow |
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ReaderOfDramione chapter 14 . 7/14 final item is contraceptives probably |
ReaderOfDramione chapter 34 . 6/24 send my congratulations to Spirit and Daniel. I SO LOVED THIS! BEAUTIFUL SEQUEL |
ReaderOfDramione chapter 19 . 6/24 KILL HARLEM! KILL HARLEM! KILL HARLEM! KILL HARLEM! |
ReaderOfDramione chapter 19 . 6/24 I SO HATE WORMTAIL AND I WILL SEVER ALL HIS MANHOODS OFF WITH NO CHANCE OF FIXING IT. HOW DARE HE! I WILL SEVER LUCIUS'S AS WELL AND WRITE MUDBLOOD ON HIS ARMMMM |
ReaderOfDramione chapter 16 . 6/24 OmG its LUCIUS DAMN MALFOY! WHY LUCY? WHY LUCIUS |
The Bazile Queen chapter 13 . 7/12/2019 Ok. I'm not a huge reviewer. I should but I don't... but the authors notes IN the story are bad form. You really shouldn't grab someone and shake them and yell in their ear at a movie "THIS PART IS MY FAVORITE COMMING UP! AREN'T YOU EXCITED?" why do it inline of a book? please stop, you are doing so well otherwise |
Lemmon chapter 34 . 9/24/2017 Zip-a-do-da Zip-a-de-day my O my what a wonderful day a hole another feeling coming my way O Zip-a-do da Zip-a-de-day. Do I really need to say anymore? Well I will for I just thought of something. Lauren and Draco are an item that WONDERFUL and Draco proud saying he's in love with a muggle if knowing that Draco was dating a muffle didn't make Lucius grange in his grave having Draco openly proudly say he's in love with a muffle sure would and so I may this again. Zip-a-do-da Zip-a-de-day my O my what a wonderful day a hole another feeling coming my way O Zip-a-do-da Zip-a-de-day. 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Only one thing pops in my head for the end of your story tour then a bunch of giggles and a few Ahhhs and that is what a Wonderful World by Louis Armstrong. Thank you for you beautiful story bye bye. |
Lemmon chapter 33 . 9/23/2017 I'm happy that Sirius was the one that was on the other side if that door not just for Hermione and himself but Harry too. I think it did her world's better by Sirius being the first person that she show send Harry the nx as it was for them to me the reason is obvious why so I won't tell why (ha ha ha how do you like me not telling you why, ain't I skin stinker) sorry not sorry. I'm happy that so far as I can tell there were no casualties unless you count Lucius and his followers...well maybe Snape but just a little and that is mainly because of Hermione believing that there was some good in him even after she knew what he did that is why I love her do much she alway tries to see the good in people there isn't any is Lucius that is why she didn't see it. I hope that the werewolves and Aurios (sorry if that worng I heat absolutely positively HEAT spelling) find those who manage to escape and do what needs to be done with them. Sirius is right Hermione would have lasted she would have made it Lucius gotten a chance to taking it futher then he did (thanks havens he did get that chance) she would have been in worst shape but she would have survived she did what she had to to save a life she didn't gave herself to Lucius she had no choice it was that or Harlem dieing if he had the chance to have taken it futher it would have been RAPE I'm so very happy that it didn't go that far it went on long enough and far enough. YAY Sirius as Hermione to marry him and yes she said yes but of course we knew that both of those were going to happen but it does not stop it from getting a yay...well two yams. Loved the way he did it was really really sweet. Well I may have thought that Sirius did a good job lying to Lauren but she show right though the lie but she was nice enough to go with it until now. I quite surprise that Hermione let S6tell Lauren about who they are and about there world but at the sameend time very happy she has been a great babysitter to little Sirina and both Sirius and Hermione like her so I think that they would want to continue using her to babysit and as Sirius she would have notice something sooner or later with Sirina developingher powers. Did Draco just short of flirt with over babysitter? And did she just flirt back? Yes I think he did and I think she did flrit image what Lucius would think if he seen this the sock of it would kill him. Oh that eould gave been a hilarious way for him to to go but, him being killed by his own follwers was trying to run away from the fight was a good way for him to go too. |
Lemmon chapter 32 . 9/23/2017 Stupid Samsung mess up anyway It nice to know that Remus has othe friends that are able to be with him on the nights of the full him and of course he for them that is also very important p. I really like how you describe all the different werewolfs Im gessing the latter that Dumbledore wrote and Fawks deliver was for them. You dont nee to tell me thier pkan I already know bit and prices of it and thats enough for me. You know I should have know a plane of Sirius's would require somthing being blown up. I seriously hope that Sirius odd feeling of something not right is somthing that can be fix quickly or at less able to work through it, with causingto much Neville but he dead you had him kill in the battle in one of the last chapters in All my Tomorrows. 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 No Hermione dont think like that your getting to think as if you are broken and your to strong for that dont gave Lucius that happ thought that he broke you you keep on telling you self that Sirius isca good man and a good dad and that he andother but especially him ,Harry, and Sirina love you and need you stay stronk for yourself and your friends they are her trying to get to you and here on of the just inthe door frame but who is it? Is it Remus? Is it it Harry? Or Bil? George and Fred? Or Sirius? Or somone else? I Kinda hope it's Sirius. |
Lemmon chapter 32 . 9/23/2017 I'm doing it this way as if Im leaving a little (or not so little review of eac page so whn I see qpqpqpqpAMAYAqpqpqp I take it as a nother page okay, does that make sense I hope it does if not sorry. See I told you thier plan it would be crazy Sirius you know he seriously cant help it (that's personally why I like him) giants are pretty scary I certainly wouldn't what to be near one ather the Hagrid but. He only half giant isn't he? If I were in Tonks shoes (I'll have Reumse yea!) I most likely gave Sirius the same answer Tonks did whe he ask her "Do you doubt me dear cousin. I wounder who these folks are Remus doesn't seem worred just surprise pluse one at less knows Remus so theyvant be to bad righr? 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 I wounder who the letter for and what's it about. Im gessing it has sothing about the rescue of Hermione and the others and the fight that will be on hand becouse of it. I hope thus horrible situation ends to nightand I hope that the Older wins 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 So the these are his werewolf buddies Im glald he have some now I dont have to feel so bad from him on the night of the full moon |
Lemmon chapter 31 . 9/22/2017 I'm happy that they have the whereabouts of were Hermione is located not only for Hermione but for Draco and Harlem too. Love that they are thinking up of a plan in the Marauder way something Sirius and Remus are pros athe, seeming how the or halfe of the old Marauders Saldana the other half is not around for one us dead send the other betrayed his friends. I know this plan is good whatever it is and most likely a little on the crazy side (you know Sirius can't help that) I just hope that they are fast enough to get Hermione, Draco, and Harlem out. Merlin only know what happing to them as their rescuers thinking of a way to get them out safe and fast with no casualties. We had enough of them Merlin knows we don't need any more if there had to be Death then let it be Lucius and his followers. Harry and Genny need to be marred, as top down Hermione and Sirius (not to mention Sirina needs her mommy back) and Tonks and Remus (we all know that they are men to be together) and Draco well he need to find the live that they did and marry her him I don't judge, I just whated him to have someone like they do as for Harlem I just what her to be okay and stay out of Sirius's and Hermione's relationship. 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Oh poor Hermione she has to let that creep touch her in ways that only lovers should IHEAT Lucius for what he is doing to Hermione and how he is making her feel. He hasn't and WILL not brake her she as Draco said is to strong for that but he is certainlygaving it a beating. Hermione is beautiful, Hermione is strong, she just need to be back where she belongs and Sirius will be able to put back what that month and how ever many day in that cell or should I say with Lucius took away from terms and what she believed it did. Thanks Merlin for the ruckus that means help is now here finally. |
Lemmon chapter 30 . 9/21/2017 I think Sirius did a good job in telling. Lauren a few as to were Herm was he got stuck in an uncomfortable place for awhile but eventually he told her somthing believable with Remuse help at the end. As I said before I trust Lauren I just don't trust if the cottage is safe but Sirius seems to think that it is hopefully Lauren will just keep Sirina the for an hour or so just so Sirina feels safe then call her mom and have her pick them up. Maybe she can wait until Sirina fats tired and have her call asleep on the way to Lauren's home. 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 You go Draco you tell your father (sorry so calls father) the absolute truth sure it cause you to get heat with Crucio course (that truly horrible spell. So sorry about that) but it was and IS the truth and Lucius knows this and heats it that is why you really got hit with that course. Please let Draco's pray be answered and I'm the way we are allhoping for, for both Hermione, Draco and Harlem too of course. 8888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Sirius has become very wise in the Love department, hasent he? Well he did loss Hermione once then once he and her were together again have her taken away. So I guess he would know how practice love is and how if you have it shear it and live it. Harry's and Sirius's conversation was a little of a tear-jurker but it was a good one. This is good very good it about time too. Plead let this misson that they are going to go on after this Older meeting go well please let us have not more casualties unless it Lucius and a few of his followers of there has to be any more casualties then let it be them. Harry needs to be married to Genny, (and we all know that they are made for each other) likewise for Reums and Tonks, Sirisu and Sirina need to have Hermione back so they can truest become a family marriage and all, and Draco just needs to live so he can find live just like those I just mentioned, other the Harlem livwing and make it thrugh this I don't care (sorry but I don't) what she does other then to leave Hermione and her family alone. |
Lemmon chapter 29 . 9/21/2017 But...but...but...I thought Harlem was dead the man boy told Sirius and Hermione she was dead, does this mean man boy lied? Why did he lie then?... whatever gestthe answer reslly doesn't matter, does it? She us alive and no in this hell of a place Ih ope that she she makes it though this hell she ud going to experience and I hope that she as well as Draco and Hermione get rescued by Sirius Harry and the Older. I should have know that the man boy lied about Harlem being dead, for the story of how she did was very unlikely, and obviously it was. 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 I wounder what Genny and Tonks doing are they shopping or is it somthing for the Older. I'm glad that Remus went with Sirius back to Hermione's and Sirius's cottage not only for if somthing went wonglike a trap or if someone unfriendly was thereit would not have been just Sirius but Sirius and Remus but, because they were able to look for ckue quiker and relized that somthing was off, grantedSirius already knew that intruders were Death Eastern's but maybe with what they thell Dumbledore of what they found he may discover somthing that will leed them to Hermione's whereabouts. Or maybe he already hase ohnI hope so Hermione been gone for to long from Sirius snd little Sirina.I like Lauren but it is really wise for Sirius to have her wach Sirina in the cottage not because I dont trust Lauren forI do it just that Death Eastern's were there, would it be better to have Lauren wach Sirina from the Black House. Then again they are having the Older meeting therebso that may cause Lauren to ask questions but still the cottage I dont thik it safe then again maybe with his animagus sent he is able to knownif it safe not. 88888888888i888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Soon what does that mean? Does it? could it? is it? What Im asking badly does this mean he thinks he might know were Hermione is being kept? Or thinks he know ofba way to find out? |
Lemmon chapter 28 . 9/20/2017 Still don't know who the muggle (I was right ha) figure is but the hitting them in the had reminds me of Harmlen . Who ever it is just have keep on throwing this and mad there way as quick as the could to the door then ran like no tomorrow. I hope they are gone and there aren't Snyder trips or any thing that can case harm to either Sirius or Sirina. 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 Good Remus did some thinking I hope he doesn't as Tonks to move in I KNOW she'll love that. Love can be and is a scary thing but it is also beautiful and amazing too. I loved Remus joke about Queen Elizabeth when Sirius ask "who";after he said "I think I may ask her to move in." I heated moving I heated the idea of it the thought of it talk and talking about it so I'm stopping. Yes Remus what ever it is that you about your saying just tell Tonks Sirius is right about that okay. 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 I really wish this figure whoever they are would have done what I sad earlier I really do now they are going to make Hermione Wach whoever this person is, to be torture. Hermione seems to now this person and she seems surprised as well. I wonder what it is there only one way On to the next chapterbut, jot tonight it is 1:26 am and I'm tired and I have to go to work tomorrow night. |
Lemmon chapter 27 . 9/20/2017 I wasent right about what I thought what the Older meeting was about it was foolish to hope for I know but...I was hoping that Dumbledore would tell them that he might have an idea of where Hermione was and how to get her home. Should have thought it was about Shape disappearance whi Leeds me to thinking that Lucius (sadly) might just have been telling the truth about Snaps. I like Sirius and Remus conversation both about Hermione although it was quite sad and about Tonks. I agree with what Sirius told Remus about how he is the only one (in the Older and close friends/family anyway) is the only one that care about him being a werewolf bad about how he is denying himself happness because of it and how foolish that is I hope Remuse lessons to Sirius reasoning (I would have him a good kick if I could) for Sirius is rigjht. 888888888888888888888888888888898888888888Well I know who the five figures are who came in with the wands they for they Mencken the dark Lord it is obvious that they are his followers true I do not know there name but I know who they belong to and what they Stan for. As for the other on I have no clue other then they are mughle, blond, know Hermione, and are apparently quite nosey. And now well...now they are in bug truble, I wounder if they live or die I hpope it the first and I hope they seriously think about keeping there nose out of others peoples business. |