xD i love your writing style

plz update...

U NEED TO UPDATE

AWSOME JOB! CONTINUE IT PLZ!

LOLZ!

great descriptionz! awsome emotionz with holly n arty! great dialogue!

The story in my opinion, wasn't very rushed, it flows. I like how you came up with the idea of Foaly inventing a machine that can make a fairy, a human and vice versa. Very clever. I don't see anything bad about the story yet.

why wont u review u make me sad wa!

i would really like it if u would update soon plz.

Its not too rushed, I like the pace, and the complications are interesting. I'd like to see Foally get the Human/Fairy transformer through the council... heh that will be good. Please keep writing.

Remember by the end of OD Artemis had gone almost straight and was acting Robin Hood figure.

Aw...poor Holly! What's got her so upset? I know what would cheer her up! Arty kissing her! Yup that would fix her up right! UPDATE! Please?

Aw, that was so sweet! You're pretty good at this stuff. I wonder if Artemis will ever have a relationship with anyone in the real books. I hope so. And I hope that Eoin Colfer can write about it as good as you can.

boohoo... Arty ,you 'eartless SOB. You broke 'er 'eart!

This fic rocks my socks! I've been waiting for a good Artemis/Holly fic. Upload soon!

I liked it I realy realy it! More please.

Nice! I think I need to read Opal Deception before I understand this fully, but it seems like a good start. Well done!

I'm just going to email you now,

xCharzx

Good start! You've started out really well, laying down the groundwork for the rest of the story. Now all you need to do is keep going! Continue to develop the plot and characters, and you'll be fine.

AH! PERFECT! BRILLIANT! INSPIRING!

Yeh, I loved it!

Update!