That was an awesome story!

this was so good

I've re-read this story twice now without leaving a review. It is a SUPERB work, the result of a talented, generous soul dedicating their time, effort, gifts and energy through to it's completion. Jareth and Sarah are magnicently portrayed; complex, charismatic characters who continue to develop throughout the tale, yet remain true to the original movie beings. The author desrves recognition for masterful creation. Dec20.. 2018

I could definitely tell the maturity in writing as the story progressed. Interesting idea.

Omg... this has satisfied so many things for me.
So much felt right... my only comment would be that it really doesn't sound terribly great with her being that young... but that's a mere blip. Loved it! Thank you!

so Awsome

Hahahaah great

Not bad, but look into your formatting so that the lines don't break before they're done. Also, the stepmother has never struck me as a particularly "evil" one, though it may be my interpretation. If you go back to the movie, Karen asks Sarah ahead of time whether or not she has any plans before asking her to babysit. She isn't even punished for staying out in the rain and arriving home an hour late. Based on what I saw, Karen was never supposed to be an "evil stepmother" figure, whereas Sarah's demands, complaints, and whinig were supposed to highlight her immaturity and selfishness.

For a first chapter though, it's not bad, but could use some improvement.

Oh I love this story!

Very good! It's a different take from other Labyrinth stories I've read. Its a bit complex characterization but you done it well.

Oh gosh, this story was so cute! I loved the trials Jareth and Sarah had to go through, and that final chapter with the wedding, just loved it!

I beg you wonderful writer, please reformat your story!

Love this chapter!

i loved this story it was very well written. the characters of Jareth and Sarah were extremely believable and complex. very romantic, i wish i had my own Jareth! i personally loved sarah's friends, they reminded me of mine. great story, keep on writing!

This is a very well-written and exciting story! Samiko is definitely on a higher level than most of the writers on here. I would expect someday to see her for an excellent tale!