Oh bravo. That was a most interesting Harper fic, and I rather liked the end there with everyone trying to figure out how they feel and what the relationship is now. Excellent job, I applaud _

Aw! This was REALLY good! I LOVED it! He had all that power...poor Harper. _ Great writing!

Loved the story. The virus was ingenious and the twist with what it actually did was great.

Have you ever read the Eisenhorn trilogy? Its a series of novels based in the Warhammer 40k universe, but I've started noticing some similarities between the main character and Harper in this fic. Although Harper is quite unique. I like the way this fic goes, and I wouldn't mind reading a sequel.

Oh! Oh, oh! What a perfect ending! Truly, that was perfectly planned and brilliant. Shyla's clothes totally made up for not killing Dylan and Rommie/Andromeda. Besides the last paragraph, I thought you wrapped things up quite well; I liked the exchange between Harper and Beka and it's nice to have a completely dead Rayne. I only wish you'd got more reviews for this story-you deserve 'em.

Thanks a lot,

jenben

*sniff* IT'S OVER! NO!

This fic was so awsome! Keep up the good work!

*gasp*

it's over! oh no!

*wipes fake tears away*

sad tt this story has come to end and what an end it has!

well..i must say that i've enjoyed the twists n turns, e turmoils, e tormenting n angst in this story!

thank u!

now tt ur done with this one...any chance of another one in e wrks?

I'm impressed: you pulled off admitting that the story is over entirely in context.

Good story.

Rayne! I knew it! Well, I actually couldn't decide if you were gonna bring back him or that Rylisa chick. Now, just use him to kill Rommie and Dylan, and then you can put him through an agonizing demise. Unless you have your own plans; that's cool, too.

Good content. I can tell you want to be done with it (I know; by the end of a story, I'm so desperate to put it out of my mind that I consider telling readers to just make it up). Keep up your good work, b/c this story is most assuredly worth it. Thanks a lot,

jenben

NO HARPER! Poor Harper!

The way you wrote this chapter was very clever. Full of suspense.

Looking forward to the nest chapters!

Oh wow, I really like this story. I can't wait for the last chapters. I can't help but be drawn into the story and Harper's struggles with ultimate power (and later lack there of). It's a very compelling idea. Congratultions on a well written story and I hope to read more works by you in the future.

I cant wait to read more of this story! Very cool!1 I give it 2 thumbs up!

Well, I'm glad you always like hearing my thoughts; I always like reading your chapters, short though they may be.

You've left me desperate to know who's in the ship and how the matter will be resolved. I stand by my hope that this person will kill Dyland, destroy Rommie, and wipe out Andromeda's computer. Looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks,

jenben

o I wonder who it is? Poor old Harper. Nothing ever seems to go his way lol.

Update soon!

Aw, heck. You just can't torture him enough, can you? But the way you're writing Harper is just great; he so vulnerable, yet oddly strong. Or maybe I'm reading more than you wrote. Honestly, it's been a bit of a long day.

Thanks for the chapter and I hope to read the next one shortly.

jenben