hey nice story, mind if I use Clowns as my caln tag for Modern Warfare 3 on the Wii, send me a pm about it

Amazing . . .

This chapter was great, definately one of your best. I don't know what else to say that hasn't been said here or over at HBOFF. I especially liked the part when you flashbacked to Chuckles as a trainee then came back to the present and had the gun jam. I was not expecting that at all, great job keeping me on my toes with this one.

This one had some superb imagery in it. Especially when you were describing what Caleb was seeing with the smearing world and objects running together and even his serene thoughts. Great chapter, can't wait for the conclusion (not in a bad way).

That was insane! Update soon.

Excellent. I loved hearing a little more detail of the plot in this one. I think this is turning out to be a much more in depth story than you have created to date. I am seeing a good and evil a little more defined than ususal as well and I like it.

Conclusion: I'm hooked. When's the next Chapter?

Chuckles, you've done it again. Your stories are just incredible, and I can't wait for your next one. All I can say is Wow, that story rocked. Although this series seems so different from your others, it retains it's Chuckles-ish goodness.

Great chapter, well worth the wait. I especially liked when chuckles was slaughtering the rebels you told it all from the rebel's point of view instead of from Chuckles'. It created a tense, suspensful atmosphere, something you're particularly good at. All in all an amazing chapter.

This is insane! Update soon.

Chuckles! Holy crap, I'd never thought to see you here! Didn't knew that you branched off from HBOFF!

At any rate, it's very, very good. And you left it at such a cliffhanger, my heart stopped beating.

Can't wait for Chap. 9!

How many Spartans are in this fic? Update soon.

Best. Ending. Ever. You have a Clancy-esque knack at creating suspensful conclusions. I also like how you describe events, such as the flashes of the gun in the polished door. It creates rich imagery that's easy to visualize. I'm eagrly awaiting more.

There don't seem to be many reviews for this, so I figured I'd add another one. Still a great story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

*Genericness should be a crime*

...you are a creepy bastard, man. You know that? Waiting for the next one.

Creepy as always. Either I am too tired to find any faults or there aren't enough for me to find. Can't wait to hear it continue.