Boring... it's basically just a crack fic. No seriousness at all. Like, no kidnapping, running away, guilt tripping, or anything juicy! Just crack.

I hate Rei, simply because Roy should not have a sibling. I wish this fic had some semblance of seriousness to it, like Ed actually tries to avoid Roy and attacks him with cat scratches and bites.

I love the idea! But I do have a question. What the hell is a 'Baka Taisa'? I tried searching it, but didn't get any result. Also, I noticed that you added Japanese words to the story. My advice: Keep the Japanese words to a minimum. The story is supposed to be in English. It would be a different story if the characters were Japanese, but they're not. It's been heavily implied that Amestris is an alternate Germany. It would make more sense to have German words instead. Sorry, but that part bugged me.

The transition between scenes threw me off a little. It would be best to have some kind of symbol when transitioning to another scene. But, that's just my advice. I noticed that the story is finished already, so I don't know if you're even bothering to read this.

I liked how straightforward your words are. It was easy to understand what was happening in the scene and how the characters feel.

I hope that you continue writing and take my advice into consideration.

"And the TV hasn't been invented yet..."

Keep it up please

Cookies?! :D

Loved it. Keep writing!

Sincerely,
SilentJade

wait, how does one forget to eat? "Even though this pain in my body disturbs me, i can't think but to wonder that I'm forgetting something...but what?" anyways, this is a good story!

can u send me a link to the quiz? I can't find it anywhere! BTW that was an AMAZINGLY CUTE story!

It's Mac ;)

Ne? You did this when you were 13?! *glooms* But yours is so much beter than mine...It's so good...

xingese food i think you meant

So rei was just trying to get those two together?

Ho boy...

what about E

THAT WAS THE MOST ADORABLE FANFICTION EVER!