awwwww

aw, so cute! LxLight for the win!

Haha! I like this, L "reading" Light's mind and telling him he's grinding his teeth is such an old married couple sorta thing to irritate the other with (and makes me wonder if couples on the verge of marriage should be chained to each other and if they haven't murdered one another after a few months of 24/7 quality time, then there's the go-ahead).

And L descibed as a scholiastic sociopath fits XD

Nice. Well, night can bring pretty peculiar thoughts. I liked this, very in character for them.

Cute...-

This was really cool, really well written. I hope you plan on writing a chapter two and three and four...ah you get the point. lol Would it be to much to ask to see a kiss between Light and L while one or the other is sleeping? Please...please...onegai?

i can fully imagen this as drawn i think you got both raito and Ls personalitys correct i most deffefinty like it

Very cute vignette. Poor Light. I like him better with the amnesia.

By the way, in the last line, did you mean "scholiastic"? I couldn't find "scholiatic" in the dictionary...

yuor story is col i like alot keep up the writting

suggestion some new caricters

Hm, you say your L needs work? I certainly don't think so. Although there may not be much room for OOCness in this case, that doesn't change the fact that I didn't see any. Keep up the good work and continue writing Death Note stuff!