Not at all bizarre once you realize where Jack is coming from. He's completely *obsessed* with Irina, it only follows that he'd obsess - voluntarily or not - over her daughter. A very good foray into the deep reaches of his mind..

This is really good. It's the first time I've read a Jack/Nadia fic but I think you captured it perfectly.

excellent short story.

"And suddenly the ferocity is gone, replaced by something broken. Her eyes grow wide and sad and he chooses not to recognize the way the fluorescent lights catch her tears. He did this to her."

This was an amazing fic. I adore Jack, and I adore your Jack, and (while I'm not on the Nadia/Jack train (since I'm still holding out for her to be his daughter)) you've captured beautifully the hurt that has to go through him seeing her so much her mother. I love it.

That being said, I've been having a dry spell with writing lately and am absolutely convinced that this is the story that got me writing again. (The story's not published yet, but when it is...thanks.)

Wow, this story has all the makes of what possibly could be awesome. I seriously hope you continue to work on it.

*loves*

I adore you, my darling.

Hey no matter what u're brilliant

I'm still all for Wiess though that might not happen

Woo

Haven't checked up on my author alerts in a long time, but when I saw an Alias one from you, I had to come by and read it. Lovely, lovely piece. I love how you were able to include bits and pieces of Irina. The illusion he spoke to was, IMO, especially powerful. I really love your fic and hope you write more.