my review I'm sorry but its so goodthis author material right here

awww! loved it loved it loved it! so cute! one of the best styles fan fictions i have ever read!

cutest story ever!

I loooove the ending. *gives you several gold stars* HAPPY HAPPY ENDING!

What I think...? I think it's beautiful. I absolutely love this fic. And you, too, for writing it. It was fluff and suspense that I needed. And at last, some good first-person point of view from Stan!

I love how emotional your fics are! I'm so addicted, I swear. X3

I think I could re-read this...

Bitterwseet with not too much bitter. Loved it!

OMG. I am going on a 'read-fletset-fics' run and wow, EVERY STORY IS BETTER THAN THE PREVIOUS ONE! Seriousleh.:)

I love how you characterize Stan so well... he's like a real person. AND I LOVED THE TWIST AT THE END.

Very well written... and sexy! :) I liked the whole twisted idea of Stan paying for Kyle. Just goes to show how stupid people can be when they're in love. And being drunk means you can deny anything.

Nice.

Jem x

So wait. Let me process this. It was Kyle's intent to go out looking for Stan all those nights because he had asked Kenny to get him drunk? To have an excuse to make out with Stan? Am I getting that right?

I KNEW there was a reason I liked this one and it stood out as one my faves from you. The whole concept...Stan falling in love with Kyle and only being able to get him when he knew he wouldn't remember it...but Kyle's intention to get him when he knew Stan would think he wouldn't remember it. Ha, how did Kyle find out Stan was paying Kenny? And didn't Stan bother telling him why he made the offer to pay him in the first place? He hadn't ALWAYS been paying Kenny. It was just after Ken said he couldn't do it anymore.

So yeah, I feel bad for Kyle harming his body like that every...single...weekend. Seven bottles? Are you INSANE? That would KILL someone if dont quickly enough and frequently enough. Kyle's a closet alcoholic then. At any rate, their little interludes were very cute, very tasteful. I like your analogies, such as "Every time he touched me for this reason or another I would feel warmth enveloping me as if I was snuggling under a blanket on a really cold night." Good imagery there. Aw...boys suck. They need to just come right out and SAY what they're feeling instead of potentially hurting their relationships by using the other or hurting themselves by drinking the entire world. Lol.

Once again, I think this was wonderful. You can say its one of your bad ones, and you can go on thinking that, but I'm going to say otherwise and tell you are full of s-. Hehe. GOOD good story and I'm excited for the two boys and their further open relationship-ness.

Fantastic. Simply, utterly, desperately fantastic.

Old story, new reviewer, fucking, fucking awesome dude!

*gives you a cookie*

Rock on _

Whoa. That was GORGEOUS. It brought out such moving emotions. You're a very talented writer!

You write better than people who only know English D!

You are so awesome, you write the best oneshots. This was so adorable and I loved it.

8)Coffeey