was sure Voldie would kill him, hmmm

This is my second time reading this. This is one of my absolute favorite harry potter fan-fictions ever, great job!

multiple grammar mistakes, but not enough to take away from the wonderful story you have written! This is great.

Amazing story but to many spelling errors... A beta-ed version of this would be super

Wow! What a touching story, I enjoyed it very much, when I started to read it I couldn't stop. You transport me into the story, that makes you a great writer.
Thanks a lot for sharing it with us.
Regards.

a lump is all i gaind from your story ! but still i love it because i love them both !

wow! It was very wonderful! I liked it very much!

I could point out a few spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, but that would be doing injustice to the incredible way you have with words. This story is compelling, and unbelievably descriptive. And once I started reading it, I had to see how it ended.

If this was your writing five years ago, I can only imagine how real a story of yours today would feel.

Ahh, sweet! My heart goes out to your Severus, it really does. Could you not continue it, or add an epilogue? After the war is over, but maybe Albus died nd Severus survived. What would he feel? Nice story, anyway.

So sweet I almost got a cavity, but I'm a sucker for Albus, Severus fics. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed it.

Beautiful fic so far.

I am rereading this great story and found that I could not read chapter 4?

UPDATE! awsome job I hope you update soon, happy writing.

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What a beautifully written story. so tragic in some parts...it made me cringe, few writers can make me do that..you are really quite talented...

That just reminded me. I was reading another fic, that reminded me of this one, so I re-read the end. Wich I love dearly. Anyway, it reminded me that this story inspired one of my absolute best poems ever. Thankyou.