Reviews for Ascension Of The Scorpion Sorcerer
Rairi Valelira chapter 10 . 7/4
Why is the dollar sign being used?
MG chapter 19 . 7/4
J’ai étais très impressionnée par cette histoire, non seulement l’intrigue est géniale mais en plus de cela elle est parfaitement bien écrite. On ne s’ennuie jamais et tous les personnages ont leur importance, aucun détail n’est mis de côté, Harry est tout simplement parfait.
Merci beaucoup pour cette fiction, félicitations et bonne continuation en espérant qu’il y aura une suite.
Rairi Valelira chapter 6 . 7/3
Spinning is kinda dumb and typical for magical logic... could have just made the crystal itself to spin or rotate
Aaron Snydern chapter 19 . 6/30
What happened, why didn't you ever finish this story it was truely great.
jewelouderkirk013 chapter 19 . 5/21
This story is freaking amazing. I was not expecting that. I just kinda figured it'd be one of those close things Harry being the recipient of the Vampire prophecy.
Clive54 chapter 19 . 5/6
Brilliant story! Hope to see this continue.
Rhyn3 chapter 9 . 5/4
So, i have a few issues with what you are doing, mostly because they are destroying my suspension of disbelief.
The internet in 1996 was nothing like it is now, or even what it was like in 2006. The odds of the dursleys even having internet access at their home is ridiculous. to quote wikipedia: "The share of households with internet access in the United Kingdom grew from 9 percent in 1998 to 93 percent in 2019."
Google was launched in 1998.
Wikipedia was launched in 2001.
Online shopping started in 1991, and there is no way you would be able to order heavy metals in such vast quantities, and have them delivered in any reasonable timeframe (ie a month), much less a day.

besides that and some other small things, great job, the story looks great! (i would go back and make sure speech is marked as such, you dropped the parseltongue "SSS" after like two chapters)
Hank1967 chapter 19 . 4/1
Excellent story! I see that you haven't updated in a long while. I hope you will consider coming back to this. It shouldn't be left unfinished!
Passerby chapter 6 . 3/12
It's really interesting. but what bothered me was that you made it like galleons were dollars, When in actuality a galleon is worth about thirty dollars each.
grimmich chapter 2 . 2/20
when does harry get to find out about the ultimate betrayal of his two friends?
Mestophile chapter 19 . 1/27
will anymore of this story be published? I would love to continue reading it! You are awesome!
slayer8131team chapter 19 . 12/1/2019
Your story is very good I just wish there was nothing to it?
HugestDrew chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
no matter how many times I read this I love it. I just really really wish they would have finished it and not just left us hanging like that.
AditheSatar chapter 3 . 9/9/2019
Nice fanfiction. Just iron out the spelling mistakes please
5havidreader chapter 19 . 7/8/2019
this is the most amazing HP story I have ever read. you're a genius
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