Excellent! It brought tears to my eyes. This is the scene I will remember as the time Sara and Grissom finally take the plunge. GSR forever!

Wow. That was so sweet. Very emotional. I love it when fics make me cry! Wonderful job. You portrayed both so well. I loved listening to Sara's innermonologue. And the ending was perfect as well as everything inbetween. Lovely. (-)

that was great :D

"Wonder if he ever thinks about me naked at times like this." n_n

and the explanation to why Grissom haven't pursued a relationship with Sara is so obvious.. why haven'd I thought of it before? o.0

great writing! very true.

"stupid car." _

So far I have liked every bit of GSR that you have written - and its interesting because your views on the 'relationship' are 'from the other side' so to speak. This was very well done, your characterizations are spot on, the humour is so good (ie. liked the line following raining cats and dogs). I like to try and give constructive reviews when I actually do review but quite honestly I don't think that you could have written this any better - it completely drew me in and when I start envisaging the scenes in my head then I really know that an author has captured the moment perfectly. There was nothing to jar me out of this vision. Well done and I hope that you at some stage continue your WIPs

Wow there are just... no words. I can so imagine Grissom and Sara getting together this way. This was so sweet. I was on the edge of my seat even though i knew how it would end. The conversation about Sofia was exactly how I would imagine it. I particularly liked how you did it from Sara's POV. You write her really well. Definately going in my favourite stories.

This was very good.. The characters were very in charachter, and it was realistic... great job!

This was terrific. Very tender and romantic, even with all the doubts of a relationship happening. Grissom's explanation of why it might not work was highly plausible. Thanks for a happy ending.

That was good-very IC and very romantic!

I like that both Gris and Sara finally figure it out-that that worst two words in the English language are "what if?".

Thanks for a great fic!

Very nice! I loved how you wrote about the confusion about Sophia, and how Grissom has to keep telling Sara that they weren't involved. Enjoyed how you organized the story with the happy ending first then the events leading up to the ending!

This is a amazing story! I don't think I have ever experience such a wide range of emotions reading a story that is only one chapter. I love this story!

This is so good.

So-o-o-o-o good.

Wow.

I love it.

that was amazing. just the way ive always imagined it would be. fantastic!

Claps, squeals and general happiness! You've captured the characters perfectly in this, and I loved the quirkiness of the first part. Definitely going on my favourite's list.

This was pretty close to perfection! Beautifully written. Excellent dialogue and plot scenario. Such believable resolution. I loved it! I really enjoy your stories. Thanks!

This story was funny, romantic, sincere, and highly realistic. I love how you perfectly captured Sara's POV. Fantastic :D.