Reviews for Breaking Apart
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Lee hadn't taken it well. Me neither! The case with Khai upset the apple cart something fierce. They were both sad and grieving; still missing each other fiercely. Pleased with your conclusion and so is Dotty.
tanker208 chapter 1 . 2/20/2018
"Wow!" says I with a crooked grin. I would have loved to seen this as an episode. My emotions run bittersweet with fond memories of this show. You really touched my heart. Very fine writing style, a true gift!
resourceful chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I read this many years ago and recently stumbled on it again, much to my delight. Even though you broke canon, you added a wonderful addition to season four by having Lee and Amanda break apart for awhile.

They had some soul searching to do and you provided a convincing scenario. Your hospital scene made a very touching reunion. Bravo.
smkrulz chapter 1 . 9/10/2001
Good story - I really enjoyed it!
Debbie chapter 1 . 7/25/2001
Very good!
rankamateur chapter 1 . 7/14/2001
Very enjoyable and well written. Just proves that a really good story still can be G rated.
Lisa chapter 1 . 9/24/2000
I really liked it. I would have liked to have seen more of the interaction between Billy and Lee - they're supposed to be really good friends - but this is a more realistic scenario than the actual season had.
Connie chapter 1 . 8/12/2000
wanted to cry Great story!
tracey chapter 1 . 5/14/2000
whoo hoo! pretty awesome, but I have one complaint. no blue boxers. what's up with that? ;P
Dana chapter 1 . 5/7/2000
Great story. It flows really nice and is the perfect leagth. Very plausible. Thanks for a great read. Dana
Kim U chapter 1 . 5/5/2000
Great story! Too bad the show's writers didn't write something along those lines and we could have seen a real marriage!
EmilyAnn1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2000
This was very touching, and true to the spirit of the characters. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Shaz chapter 1 . 5/4/2000
Nice one, Libbie. A little short, perhaps (trans: I would have happily read more of this!) but in character, well written, makes sense. Thanks!
Jennifer chapter 1 . 5/3/2000
I enjoyed your story and hope to read more in the future.
Kathy M chapter 1 . 5/3/2000
Wonderful story! I was almost in tears at the beginning, their pain was so real. The description of Lee only moving once in five hours ... it just tugged at my heart. The characterizations were true, the story so believable. Please write more!
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