So wait, wait wait wait. Instead of going in the Time Chamber to get away from it all and hopefully grow up more to get it under control, instead of taking a ship into space, instead of contacting Dende to have a look with his healing Ki, instead of having someone contact Other World to ask for possible knowledge or solutions from King Kai who could no doubt ask others, instead of going to Namek where the Dragon Balls are good to go...

Instead of Any of those things he does this? Holy crap this makes no sense at all and you should have just stuck with smut.

oh wow

interesting story, congratulations

hello from germany xD
i really liked your story. i dont know how you came up with that idea, but i like it a lot. especially that everone lost their memory, so that we reader get the impression that it really could have happend this way. also i liked how you wrote and the chapter lenght.
bye
chiara d.

p.s.
i would love to read a sequel to that, in whish we can see, what happen when eveyone get to know what really happend before the eternal dragon erase their memory.

Please make a sequal to this story and make more dark and dirty rewrite thst shows the tape/lemon scenes. Love dark horny gohan fanfic

Please update. Please show us the violent lemons between gohan and 18. Based on what was hinted is 18 pregnant with gohan's child. Leading to the sequel, if you make one and gohan wont remember what he did to 18 because of the dragon balls. I hope you take advantage of this angst and drama story's potential.

Found this very interesting to read. I like how you made sure to question why 18 stayed there in the meadow even though she knew gohan would be coming back
Very good :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! It has great grammar (Better than mine, really!) and it has a consistent story flow. The characters seem so IC most of the time, but in every fanfic, you can expect a little bit of OOC, otherwise, it might not be your own as well. I love how someone else other than myself made a story of 11 year old Gohan and 18 instead of future Gohan or high-school crap ass Gohan. Anyway, back to the review... the story was great, had me reading the whole way through to be precise. I had to go to bed one night and stayed up all night (till 2 AM really) because I wanted to see what would happen next. The story built up to intense moments and I was really psyched, but when I read Chapter 4... it kinda disappointed me... I was hoping to read some major lemon in this because it seemed like the whole story built up to this one moment of him finally fulfilling that urge only for me to read that he woke finding himself half naked and 18 on the other side of a field... I was really disappointed to be in fact. The whole story was good until that moment and beyond... they probably could've really kept their memories and learn from this problem... well, the 1st wish was a good call, but the forgetting part really bummed me out and how they all just went on like nothing was wrong. Oh well, just being honest here. Either way, adding it to my favorites list and I am going to alert this as well, because I am hoping that somewhere inside you, you might rewrite Chapter Four as an alternate-ending Chapter or something. I hope you do. Anyway, peace and if you want to, respond and I'll be atleast glad you read this ridulously long (bad spelled) review.

You made 18 OOC you shouldve say so because the 18 you have here act like 16 or 19 lol no offence still a good story

glad to see that this story is still alive

love it ..:)

can't wait for more

Wow - I'm very happy that you finished this story. I'm glad I managed to give you the motivation for it.

Oh my god... You just explained why Gohan BECAME A COMPLETE LOSER! It makes no sense that a Saiyan of any kind would act like Gohan did during and after the Buu Saga. *sigh*

Hmm. I think that it was a bad idea of them to wipe their memories. I don't think I would have wanted to lose mine, and it guaranteed Gohan would become A TOTAL LOSER! Sorry, but it really upsets me that he became A- you get the point...

So, do you intend to fit this in with canon? It looks like it, but I just can't comprehend why Eighteen would have for any reason hooked up with Krillin...

Thanks so much for finishing this. I really enjoyed reading it. Gohan/Eighteen has rapidly become my favourite ship, and your exploration and explanations of both the Saiyan heritage and Android Eighteen's inner workings impressed me a lot. You're a great writer!

Aw I wish I could read more *sigh*. I love Gohan/18 stories _

But yours finished perfectly where it did :)

Good job!

I see you haven't updated for three years. Unfortunate. I enjoyed this story, even if the ferocity of Gohan's last attack made me grimace. You've come up with a nifty idea of how Android 18 worked inside, even if it is, I believe, outside of canon, and your idea of Saiyan puberty fits with their race.

I hope you come back to this someday, but I won't hold my breath. :(

your a great writer so I know you can write yourself out of this corner.

I love the original storyline you have used, well done! Maybe you could carry on the story a little more through the years of Gohan still growing up, and maybe he could get more vicious? Maybe bring 17 back into it too, that may spice things up a little!

Please continue writing, I see that you have written some stories last year, so hopefully you still visit here every now and again.

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I am trying to write a fanfic at the moment, it is a Trunks/18 (both future). Not a romance of yet but I think it may turn into one )

Sapphire