*tears* luv it

I hope no one in the real world will kill themself so quickly by being so dense.

it was really good, i loved it a lot

I love it but it needs to have more detail. I think there should be some dialoge. But overall it has a good plot line it does explain a lot.

xoxo,

under*the*waterfall

H m m . . . Well, you already realized that the characters were a bit out of character. That was one of the only problems I saw. The other thing was how you wrote the story. I can't figure out if the lyrics were in the note or not. Maybe that's just my personal problem, but anyway. The lyrics weren't in it, were they? So confused . . . Regardless, the story was great. Good work.

~ Oasis

Wow! What an effective story! A trsgedy yes but it just goes to prove that you shouls (forgive the cliche) seize the day! Ok I really should go and tell that boy that I like him now! A really good story - you're one hell of a writer!

Mm-kay. I'm not a big fan of suicide fics, and, yes, they certainly were out of character, but apart from that, this is really quite good.

it was good. i think it would hav been better if Ron just went back to his life, you know..like...I'll never forget you, blah blah woof woof.

FIRST OFF, you ended it WAY to abruptly...you can't go on with it that way...it ruins the story. Also, I can't even see Hermione and Oliver together...Hermione and Krum, eh...It's jsut too weird. Also, I'm a major Luna and Neville shipper, so I couldn't believe the Luna and Ron relationship.

SECOND OFF, getting past my whining, other then the horrible abruptmeness after the "AFTERWARDS", it was an interesting story. Not happy, no...but it was something that happens. It worked, and it was sad. It was a good story, I'm just picky...:D

that was really sad and I cried. I very rarely cry over boy... we're about to start reading Romeo and Juliet in english and I know I'm gonna 's what this story reminded me of, except without the old fashioned english and shakespearean stuff. Still great job...*wipes another tear away*

I just want to know b/c I really didn't get it at first, but Ron killed himself right?

im crying why so sad so sad

I actually like it. It's definately different and I like how there isn't just flowers and bunnies. However I have to say that I don't see Ron just hiding his feelings for Hermione and you never specified why he never went after her. Still, this is some awsome writing!

I thought that this was really well written, you were right this is completely out of character, but its a change. And change is good sometimes, and in this case it was good, I mean it was dreadful that Ron and Hermione died. But it was a good story, good plot line. I really enjoyed it. Very deep.

keep writing,

suzy

Oh my goodness. That was so sad. I'm crying as I'm writing this review. But it was romantic. I liked it, it was really a break from all the traditional fluffy Ron/Hermione fics. Keup up the good writing.

Much love, Aina