awsome story

please update really soon

Cute story, hope you decide to continue it

Hey,

This was a cute chapter, though you might want to go to settings to see whether you accept anonymous reviews or not.

Bye, smile :-)

Hey,

Intriguing chapter and I liked the interaction between the characters.

Bye, smile :-)

kool, i rely liked it, hurry up w/ tht next chptr

That was a good chapter,

Please update asap,

cya :D

goof story, continue. ur not going to make it a lory/jess are you? make it rory/jess.

Hey,

I liked this chapter; it was better than your last one and so far very interesting to read.

Bye, smile :-)

Please write more, seems v interesting so far :)

hey this is good i like it alot!well i hope u dont mind me talking to ur reviewers but there is a yellow sign in front of lukes that says lukes diner williams hardware store is on the top and then theres a sign that says lukes i dont think ull be mad cause im defending u!good job update soon!

this is a really original idea.

keep it up! this could be a really good story. i get the feeling ;)

-molly-

This is interesting, you should continue. One thing I have to point out is that there is no sign that says Luke's Diner, it still says William's Hardware. You also might want to say during what season this takes place in.

Hey,

Definitely an interesting first chapter.

Bye, smile :-)