it was a vere nice story thank you

wanda marie

Loved it! Can't wait for the sequel. I agree that there could be a lot written between this and 16 years, but maybe we'll just have to review the next one like crazy and get ya to write something else. :) Keep on writing.

I love this happy end. I was afraid EJ would meet this Frank Williams right before they could get on they train, but thank God they didn't.

I agree with Captain Tish, your new story about Hank and EJ sounds very interesting, but a timejump of 16 years, there could be more stories in the time between (an actually meeting with Frank Williams would be quite interesting).

In fact, I'm afraid that this would be the last story of this series and this would be very sad.

Maybe we can persuade you to write a few more. :-)

One event can prompt a chain reaction and/or a change in the future. Perhaps Hank telling Emma Jane the TRUTH, thus trusting her enough to give her the oportunity to forgive him, will make things better between them 16 years from now. My, oh my, currently they have been married how long, 10 years or so, how many years will they be married in 16 more? I think they will stay together through anything.

Great story! I look forward to reading the next story.

Michelle

Oh, another beautiful story has come to an end... :( But I'm glad that there is another sequel coming up! I'am also glad that Mrs Brown is on speaking terms with her daughter again. And yes! I knew he was going to be mentioned, Frank Williams. Is he going to play a role in the sequel? He is, isn't he?

Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the (probably the last) sequel.

Well, that was a wonderful ending! It's nice to see them so happy. Your next story sounds really good. I'm looking forward to it...but do you have to jump so far ahead in time? There's lots of stories that can be told in between now and then! PLease? Well, I guess I'll just have to be happy with whatever you give us! Thanks for the good reading!

This is getting craze intensely good!

Ahh. She did make the right choice. She and the children belong in Colorado Springs with Hank. Why couldn't they tell her who the father was. That was a past event. Well, it is a dream, so... I think that it's possible Will will survive past the age of 16, after all that is just one POSSIBLE future. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm sensing this story is coming to an end. There is going to be another sequel, right?

Wow, tense chapter! But Hank was great. And it looks like Mrs. Brown DOES still care for Emma Jane. What a cliffhanger - good thing the next chapter is already up! I would go crazy if I had to wait.

How strange: Hank has never been one of my favourite characters, but I fell in love with this trilogy right from the start, and with the EJ character. I also really appreciate your regular updates (if only all authors on this page could do the same...)

And I did like the 'supernatural twist' in this chapter. I hope to read more soon, about the future consequences of EJ's decision!

I don't have to write an own review, because Lene has already written everything I wanted to say in her review. Really, I felt exactly the same.

I have to say, you are not afraid to walk on very thin ice, you know, what I mean? And sometimes I have the feeling, that you are enjoy a little bit too much playing with the emotions of your readers. ;-) But that is no critic, because I like that. I don't like stories, which are moving always on the safe side and where you know, what happens next.

You are very talented, I said that already and it's just a joy to read your stories. (Even if that chapter was a bit nerv-racking.;-))

No offence, but I was really close to hating this chapter! And before everyone gets mad at me, please let me explain! Thank you... I really hated Lydia and Abigail in this chapter. The way they were manipulating Emma Jane to choose the other option. And I was really worried that she was going to choose for a life in New York without Hank (I mean, they were really messing with her mind!). I was kind of relieved that she did choose to be with Hank after all, but I am still a little bit worried about how this story is going to develop. What if she'll meet this Frank? What if she'll like him? Oh my God, I see a whole new storyline coming up... But Emma Jane and Hank belong together! Anyway, I got a really bad feeling while reading this chapter, and that feeling isn't completely gone...

I must say that I think you are an excellent writer. It takes very good writing skills if you can make your readers feel such strong emotions while reading your story. Keep up the good work!

Oh, this is so sad! I nearly cried reading this chapter (and I don't cry easily, believe me...). Very powerful chapter and what a way to end it! I am really curious to see how you are going to let this story end. Are you going to let her die? And if you are, will this be the end of the series, or do you have other new plans for Hank? But maybe you're not going to let her die after all and Emma Jane and Hank will live happily ever after! :) Update soon please!

You can't do that!

I don't know what else to say. Great writing as always, but you just can't do that. I'm so shocked.

OMG! What a cliffhanger! Please don't let her die! They belong together...