Very very sad, made me cry. Like each chapter cuz I felt so bad for him and his family going through such horror. Confused on the ending tho. She died and was allowed in heaven to join the others because of Keitaro and somehow the little sister saw all of that despite still being alive? And then was encouraged by her dead brother to die inorder to join them?

This is very sad, but fuck granny Hina, he's dead now because of them and likely her as well for pushing him to stay there even now after death. Also weren't they supposed to be questioned and stuff? How were they able to just commit suicide and the others move to different properties? Were they questioned already?

This is so sad...

I think for an angst story, you somewhat did this wrong. It's actually far more "angst" for the characters to live with the repercussions of their decisions than for them to off themselves in suicide.

Other than that, it's pretty well written and it moved along at a good pace and covered a lot of ground for such a short story. Proof that you don't need to write 200k words to make something worth reading.

Cheers
QC

That was a very emotional story. I really enjoyed the ending. It just left me with a good feeling. Great job!

The ending was truly touching and very emotional. Nice to see Naru survive all that harsh prison life, seek forgiveness, and finally get a good ending.

Very good job! what a nice, i mean sad fic. You may got talent in angst story

So sad!

I really am tearing up.

I mean it!

I would have probably cried if it wasn't for the fact that I'm sort of dehydrated right now P

That was plain wonderful, could have been longer, but wonderful. The plot device of Keitaro losing his Immortality is a bit overused, but you played that out pretty well.

Poor Su and Shinobu, they never did deserve that '(

The same goes for Kanako, all she wanted was her onii-chan '(

The rest, yeah they can rot in hell P

You should really finish your other stories, 'till then_

Dude, that was the most angsty story I have ever read. I don't even think Naruto could get that angsty. It was still awesome though. PEACE!

WAHH! I still have tears in my eyes as I type this review. I love stories like this, making my heart beat faster.

The ending was so touching...

That was so well written!

In Japan there is NO trial by jury, criminal cases are handled by a tribunal. Also Motoko's seppuku would have been enough to satisfy honour.

I'm just dazed by this story. Great future ahead for this writer. Wonderful work, very touching and sad.

This is really a touching story.

This is extremely good

I really cant think of other comments right now.

Its very emotional and ...

Good job

*sob