I love Bullivard of Broken Dreams. But for real girl. Dont go scaring us with those nightmares of Neji's! I thought it was for real!

I LOVED Shikamaru's freakout!

You are the best author EVER!

OMG AWESOME. I love a person who can portray both Neji and Tenten well. I love it!

U fucking scared me when I thought She died! But other than that, amazing chapter! Keep it up!

Awwwhhh feel the love, ladies and gentlemann 3

Story was a bit confusing...

YOUUUU BIIIUIIYCCHHHH II KNEWW ITT

When you said that you would personally go with shikatema, I was like "fuck yeah!"

OMG XD DYING OF LAUGHTER HERE . "Neji, you think I'm pregnant?"
I looovved this story soso much, too bad you stopped writing it :(
I know you probably forgot everything you were gonna write, so I guess I can't really beg you to update, but I'd love you forever if you did. If you want, I could continue this if you told me your plans, and I'd send you the written copy for you to edit or something :)
Or I could just continue it. BUT I DON'T WANT THIS STORY TO GO TO WASTE. SO PLEASE GET SOMEONE TO CONTINUE TO WRITE THIS IF YOU'VE GIVEN UP. And I know you probably don't even read these reviews anymore, but I just want to thank you for your dedication and answering all those reviews (even though none of them were mine) because it made me feel like you really cared, and had so much dedication for this story. So I hope you become a writer one day, and USE THAT PEN NAME SO I KNOW IT'S YOUR STUFF I'M READING XD
Or you become a soccer player on that team you wanted to be on so badly :)
But it's been like six years... You're probably too busy in university or something... Well whatever. Miss you even though I've never met you :/
KEEP BEING AMAZING.

! LOVE this! more please?

stares into a dark void Hello? Are you there? Please continue! silence cries

make more please

omg funnyy love it !

the story hasn't reveal much about tenten bloodline at all. you didn't even say what her clan name was and the name of her bloodline. to tell th truth when i read the summary i thought it was going it be more exciting. i like the way that you made tenten a powerful konoichi without her bloodline though. other then that it was not very exciting. i still want you to update though and hopefully we will learn tenten bloodline pretty soon. im curious in what it is, evethough you have sort of shown what tenten bloodline looks like, you haven't told us what it exactly does. like i said before i still want you to update