Love all the Rodney baiting :-)

brilliant story; very funny. One mistake though, Scotland is part of Britain. Britain is mde up of 4 countries: England, Ireland, Scotland and Wales. Apart from that though, excellent!

Adorable men, humor and talk of dessert-what's not to love? I found it a bit odd reading in third person, present tense, but everything else was just lovely-the characterization, the comedic timing and the content. That they all think Scottish cuisine haggis is sadly believable, as is Carson's understandable aggrivation. Now I want to try cranachan.

Aw-cute! And it has Carson, too! Plus dessert? Whee! Loved the guys' tales of their fave desserts. McKay was especially in character, with that "culinary orgasm" line. Would love to hear more about Carson's fave foods because I love hearing his voice (even if it's just in my imagination), and because they really are "foreign" to what the rest of the guys are normally fond of.

Question, does being allergic to "lemons" make one also allergic to "limes"? I'm surprised you didn't choose "Lemon Meringue" as the pie McKay tried, although "Key Lime" is really good, too! Yummy!

One thing that bothers me is the type of quotes you use (or how they appear on the screen). Normally we use "dialogue." However, you have what appear to be twin commas as the beginning of dialogue and regular quotes as the ending of dialogue.

Best line, "Will you stop having a culinary orgasm by yourself and share with us?“ Hehe, I laughed, then I had a coughing fit. Hehe, But good story tho. Keep up the good work!

Awesome! I love Carson-centric stories and dessert. So the two-in-one is a winner!

Not only funny, but really in character. I love good dialog and you have all their mannerisms down, too. I could just picture all of them in the mess. Good work!

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Wonderful! Absolutely priceless. *g*

Almost died laughig at this bit:

And Rodney's dessert story was hilarious!

Culinary Orgasm! Lol. :D

And I love Rodney's little story, and Ford, such a darling.

You have a nice touch when writing for these characters, I can see them talking in my head. :D

Great little story.

I really enjoyed that, especially Carson correcting myths and Rodney's little tale. Of course now I really want dessert ... :)

That was bloody fantastic and hilarious too boot! hehehehe a nice little slice of the boys and their distinct and wonderful characteristics superbly written! I can literally see the four of them, their expressions and hear their voices reading that, well done!

And now I have a craving for dessert...