Thank you, so much for this. So many authors leave their stories quietly abandoned without a word to their fans. So thank you for this outline, even if it seems a little cheesy, it is still better than nothing. And when you consider where you started, ten years ago, and how little was known at the time about the canon Narutoverse, it really isn't that cheesy really.

ohhhhhhhhh they sound sooo CUTE!
PAWZ2000

great story.

Really enjoying the story

Please please please pretty please update this story soon. By the looks of it you are almost done. Please finish

It.

i'm confused. did you or didn't you update this story on 7/21/10? it doesn't look like you did. please please please update it soon. i've been following this story for years and i want to know how it ends.

There's an author in my area that couldn't get the publishing industry to look at him either. He self published on the Kindle and got enough popularity that the industry changed their mind and subsequently have just recently given him a deal for the three books he's written. Just an idea.

hey! i have a question for you..umm im really interested in you know reading something thats not FF, because..well i think is damaging my sight for real! and u get kinda bored sometimes so its cool to try something new... back to the point: the site its obvious its a blog but im dont know them too well except u know the usual (facebook,twitter..) so, does you book have a name or what, do you have an account?

dunno.. anything will work

thank you! bye take care!

the ending of this chapter was nice poor zabusa, but i love to see sasuke as such a loving dad XD

That fanfic was great. Hope you update soon cause' you are really keeping me on the edge. :) :] () () ( ) ( ) () () (-.-) (- . -) (-.-) YAY! BUNNIES!

AWESOME :D

This chapter was longer than usual which was a nice change. The part about Naruto's fusion was a bit confusing but I'm sure if I go back to previous chapters it'll be clearer. I also loved Sasuke's tenderness at the end. It's hard to remember that he's still a kid. How old is he now, 12, 13?

Nice job. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. (Which hopefully, will be uploaded soon!)

my goodness been so long that i nearly forgot what this story was. but i'm really glad that you're back again i'm also glad you managed to work in minato's actual name and clan xP so it's all good i'll be anticipating the ending as much as possible so don't dissapoint! ja ne

"HE" is actually Gaara, isn't it?

I'm surprised that the story will be coming to an end.. I'm sure I'll miss this story of yours... Love the chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter seeing that it will be from the prologue... I'm sure things will be interesting in that place.. Keep up the good work!

I'm glad that you decided to continue with the story, perhaps after the ending, you can rewrite it in the way you want.. Keep up the good work! _