| Reviews for Unexpected Events |
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   Bjalf chapter 6 . 7/13 You consistently misspell "quite" as "quiet", which other reviewers already pointed out, but you don't seem to edit and reupload. Too bad, it's otherwise quite well written. The "shopping trip from hell" was overly detailed and long. Fewer details or split up into several trips on different days might be less tedious for us blokes to slog through. I hate to stereotype, but detailed clothes shopping trips are usually written by female authors. Males mostly buy the first thing that fits, colours be damned. |
| Sleepyhawk502 chapter 12 . 7/5 Oh no! I am disappointed that you have abandoned this fic. You were doing so well. I will follow to see if you will ever come back to it. Considering that it has been so long, I guess that is not going to happen. So sad! Thanks for sharing what you have. |
| Dagondawn chapter 12 . 5/5 Is there going to be a update to this story anytime in the foreseeable future? Cause I was really enjoying this story and would like to know what happens next! |
| Traveler301 chapter 10 . 4/27 Damn! I'm getting closer and closer to 12. chapter 11, where I know you stopped writing on this story in 2005. Now, of course, , 2020. I keep hoping that you will start writing on this story again. It is a great , Ron Pate |
| Traveler301 chapter 9 . 4/27 It seems to me that Dumblebutt is so far around the bend that doesn't see any kind of reality any more. To say that he is obsessed with his own mystique and he is having trouble accepting anyone questioning his authority and power is angering him to the point that in striving to get what he calls his right because he is "Dumbledore". I always remember that old saying " Power corrupts, and absolute corrupts absolutely". It's hard to believe that your story gets better with every chapter you write but it does! Thanks, Ron Pate |
| Traveler301 chapter 8 . 4/26 Great story,still. you are a great story teller. Thanks, Ron Pate |
| Traveler301 chapter 6 . 4/26 I've never read a better story than this one, and I've read a whole lot of stories. Your writing is as good as my very most favorite writers. Do you think that someday you might complete it? I hope so. Thanks, Ron Pate |
| Traveler301 chapter 1 . 4/26 Okay, you got me. Hell of an idea that shows a lot of potential . If your story is as well thought out as your prologue, should be a fun read. I love it when someone, or anyone for that matter, breaks one off in Albastard Dumblebutt's ass. In case you can't tell, I don't like him much. I learned that in the first book that JKR wrote, and have never liked the Dumblebutt character. Thanks for the promising good story, Ron Pate |
| GenieM chapter 12 . 3/12 I hope you finish the story. I enjoyed it. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/19/2019 I am enjoying this story and hope that you will finish writing it |
| Tamara chapter 12 . 11/30/2019 Great story so far... Please write more chapters... Pretty please. |
| firedolphinfly chapter 12 . 10/12/2019 Wow enjoying your story. Hope you plan on finishing it. Keep updating please great story. |
| jmw03u chapter 11 . 9/21/2019 I absolutely loved this story! I think you got the characters down really well. I would love to know how Harry did on his OWLS. Thank you for writing this |
| jmw03u chapter 12 . 9/21/2019 I absolutely loved this story! I think you got the characters down really well. I would love to know how Harry did on his OWLS. Thank you for writing this |
| jmw03u chapter 12 . 9/21/2019 I absolutely loved this story! I think you got the characters down really well. I would love to know how Harry did on his OWLS. Thank you for writing this |
