Awful. I hated it. Don't share this kind of filth.

Holy shie! This was so intense. I loved it

Wow... That was disturbing, but it was written so you could completely understand him. Still it was very beautifuly written. Thanks for sharing!

This was so dark and disturbing, absolutely horrific...but in a good way, if that makes sense? It was written brilliantly and felt so terrifying and real. Excellently done, thank you!

Well written and clever. Thanks for sharing :)

This is amazing-you're a great writer and this bit was very well crafted. Great job!

Interesting very interesting...u do know I love my Snape so why u kill him with a dementors kiss...u could of made Hermione love him

Wow, you write really well. This one shot is the definition of horror. Great job.

Nice (I refer to your writing style and the psychology of the story. It really has a subtle horror). The story itself is, of course, not very nice, murder generally isn't. Maybe it would be cool to add a special reason for the murder eg jealousy because Hermione looked lovingly at Ron. Sooo... great story :)

Hey, this is really good. I think you got it all how it should be, though i would have enjoyed mcgonagal and dumbledore's reactions to what he was doing, or remus and sirius, but tbh this is such a dark fic that that would have been a bit too comical. So perfect! Not what i normally read but very well done. :) x

Muchos depressedos

It was realistic unfortunately (or in your case fortunately), I don't usually like Snape evil, but you wrote this beautifully. I admit, I loved it. Not usually what I read but you did wonderfully! Well done x

Tears in my eyes.

Tell, that's no surprise.

This oneshot is very intense and you got his madness from the perfect angle.

A very good one shot indeed!

dina dissendium if u don't like the story content u were warned in the beginning so drag ur loser self somewhere else. if u arent' going to write something constructive or nice and the story is not ur style then don't say anything at all. didn't ur mother ever teach u that. if u have nothing nice to say keep ur fat jowly mouth shut and go jump off a cliff.

I LIKED this story, it is not my style as far as plot goes but I can totally see Snape going this way. After all he's been through jeez it's a wonder he hasn't before. It is well written and flows nicely. Good job.

you are so poetic that was beutiful 5 stars