This is so lovely. I love Leia's confession that if she "picked" between Luke and Han, she'd lose the other, and she couldn't handle that either. That makes so much sense. And I love how easily she accepts Luke's "I love you" and says it to him in return, all the while acknowledging that it isn't a romantic love at all. So often fanfic is guilty of not recognizing that any other sort of love exists, so this is quite refreshing for two people who don't yet know they're siblings to be able to accept that they love each other, will always have each other's backs, but it doesn't have to be romantic in the least.

Fantastic job.

I love how you ended it almost the same way you began if with Leia curled up in a chair by an injured Luke. It gave the story a sense of... Something, I can't think of the words right now but I hope you get what I'm trying to say! ;)

(you wrote Luke and Leia's relationship beautifully, too)

Incredibly sweet story. You got the characters and the feelings and the details about them all down pat. I could just hear them speaking in my mind, and I really liked the moments of introspection about relationships and events and feelings, especially Luke and Leia's confusion about how they love each other so much yet aren't in love, and the descriptions of why Leia always drove Han away and why Han always wanted to leave. Your dialogue is excellent and very well-written too.

The only thing I really need to point out is the formatting - If you could just edit it to get rid of the squares and replace them with quotation marks, it would make the story flow way, way better. It's also saying something, by the way, that your story is still so enjoyable even with such a major distraction :)

:) Good work!

i like the look into leia this provides. her quiteness and need for action at the same time comes through beautifuly.

Very nicely written! It makes a lot of sense, both in the plotline and concerning the emotions. You should be proud of this story.

Wow, I think you depicted Leia and Luke very well. Very well written.

Cool! Fantastic fic, there. I like how you sort of eased them into it. It's not easy writing these types of fics. I think you did well.

Pretty good story, mate. Very interesting and it doesn't stray too much from the basic idea of the movie.

I remember reading this a long time ago, and it is still one of my favorite Luke and Leia stories. Very believable characterizations of both of them.

That was really, really good! Write more! I love sibbling stories! _

A well written, believable, sweet story. Nice job.

A wonderful, tender depiction of how Luke and Leia came to terms with their relationship. Beautifully done! Descriptive, emotional and touching. Bravisimo!

::sigh:: I read this fic over at fanfix and I thought it was just wonderful! Great work! I really enjoyed it! -LadyCallie

I loved this story. It was very good and realistic for Star Wars. Keep up the good work.