I like it is that going to be it ar is there going to be more?

Nice fic you have there.

One little problem i spotted was that you mixed up 'your' and 'you're' (you are) a couple of times.

LL

“I didn’t have anyone to look after me anymore. I had to look after myself. Plus I like the respect I get.”

“Respect, fear more like it.”

“Yeah well, same response.”

Sweet! That was an exciting dogfight you wrote. :) I think that Kara did love Zak once, though. Looking forward to more Lee/Kara!