fool! no Aes Sedai is THAT stupid! (not that i'm standing up for Eladia)

I like your work, but I've been noticing a trend that is frustrating to say the least. Your ideas spawn great interest and appeal, yet you fail to develop them. For example; how does Moiraine and Elaida deal with the situation? What are some of the repercussions?

I think you're problem is not lack of ideas, it's now to resolve them. You take your stories to a sub-climax and then finish them abruptly. Take the time to explore where a situation can take your characters, and when you've finally put them through hell and back then wrap up the story.

this is good t draws away from the book. It tells more of what happens in real life to a person who isn;t normal to me. Good writte!

Jeannette

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Hmm...interesting.

Whee! You finally put it up!

Now for my part of the story!