Yes Naruto! Run! Run far!

*naruto and Kakashi promptly committed seppuku*

I expected Naruto, Itachi, Akamaru, or Kakashi to kill someone. Or become Nukenin. Or plot the destruction of Konoha. Or enlisting Danzo's help.

Sick the juubi(ten tails) on her! I hate the damn Mary Sues.
Yours Sincerely
Gedo Mazo.
(Good job by the way :-D)

I smell a possible sequel~

Stand up sing Hallelujah! "HALLELUJAH!"

Okay, I am in awe of this crack parody. Hmmmmmm things are heating up I see... Will the others stay spell-bound by her? What if the relationships she set up, ne?

Hilarious! I laugh a lot. Actually, I a little sad when Kiki death (What's wrong with me, sad because Mary Sue, lol) but besides of that, everything is perfect haha. I love the ending! Another Mary Sue! Such a plot twist!
And the most funny part is Sasuke! Haha, it's even more hilarious when he said 'I will not let you die' and get Naruto in the bridal style. And Naruto respon is almost comical!
And I feel bad about Kakashi, I almost agree he paired with Kiki lol. It's also sad to hear DeiSaku broke up. Okay, that my review, thanks for writing this fun story, I enjoy it

hahahahahaha

aaAAAAAAAAGHHHH *dies*

Love it!

story ever!
Almost puked
10/10

ANOTHER SUE? OH NOES! (Poor Kakashi and Naruto! Itachi is in for it now...)

fuck you for making kiki

This is a bad ending.
But a good one too.
You know what I mean?