"I PROMISE to finish the story."
...12 years later, no update.

Liar. :P

Oh no! That's okay, thoughI like this story, so I can wait.

Aw...so cute! I like this story! It's great how the chapters have become longer! Thank you. And your welcome for my review last time! I'm here for you and if you feel you need any help with your story, please look on my profile and email me.

~lots of love~Miss Sweetness

That was good. Thanks for spacing out the dialogue more it helped alot. I can't wait will Xiao have complications? I guess I'll have to wait and see please update very soon and I'm gonna be greedy but... can you make it a little bit longer next time?

xoxo

S.C.

VERY cute chapter.3

I like Heihachi's attitude towards Xiaoyu, but I think Kazuya was just a tiny tiny bit OOC.

Update soon, pweaty pwease*.*

Hee hee hee, cute chapter.

I bet'cha it's gonna get pretty fired up in da next chapter, though;P

it's so funny! it's pretty sweet the way jin calla xiao 'baby'... hehehe... UDATE ASAP!

This is pretty funny! I like it please will you make the chapters longer! I'm begging here! Please continue, it's great! I'll be waiting!

-Lots of love-Miss Sweetness

This is getting good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Can I give you some helpful hints tho? When someone else starts talkin you should make a new paragraph for their speech so it's easier to follow because I had a bit of trouble following that. And also this is just cuz I want more of the story... Can you make the next chapter a lil bit longer? I can't wait for it! I'm sure that it will be good!

xoxo

S.C.

Nice, chapters a little short but I can live with it. More soon.

The story is nice so far but the chapters are quite short. Please update soon.

S.C.

:P I think it should've been longer, but it was still good

YE! I love it! Update soon, or I'll KILL you_