This is seriously good. I mean, it went in a much more classic crime drama direction than I thought it would, and I seriously love it for that. I could imagine watching this as a mini series for Easter.

I really did not expect that ending. I don’t know if they entire thing was acting but it was really clever in the end. I enjoyed! Keep writing!

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BEST! Story. Ever! :D

thanks for such an interesting read!

skipped after reading the ending. (For me it's the writing that matters so the lack of suspense does not detract from a good story, so I do often check the ending to see if it is palatable)

This was a fantastic story with an awesome premise and a look at a minor character who wasn't explored very much in the books. Thank you so much for writing this! I really enjoyed it! :)

Is Remus part of the Game? And oh, I wish that Alistair had survived but he died a hero's death. Is Percy hiding again? Amazing chapter - this one answered many of the questions I had left. :)

Did Percy cast the killing curse? Oh no, what an awful thing to have to remember. Alistair must have been terrified once he realized what he had to do under the Imperius curse. Lestrange is insane...

Alistair is Bellatrix's and Rodolphus's son? Or nephew? I think that the Weasleys are regretting their treatment of Percy too late - I wish they'd known him better when he was with them.

I'm guessing one of Tonks's captors is Rodolphus Lestrange and the other under the Imperius is Alistair Xavier? And Percy was part of the Game so he was, in effect, an undercover Auror? Everything is starting to fit...

Oh dear. I wonder why the imposter was so interested in Tonks...and wow, Fred and George found the drawings that Tonks still doesn't know about. Loved the chapter as always! :)

I really hope Oliver and Tonks don't get themselves in trouble by going to the hospital. Wouldn't the fact that Percy told Dr. Shah about magic be a violation of the Statute of Secrecy? And did Alistair Xavier pose as Percy? Is that why Percy became estranged from his family? Awesome chapter as always! :)

I hope Percy and Dr. Gwen escape without any issues. And the mystery deepens...lovely chapter as always! :)

I knew it! So is the real Dr. McCoy dead? And Gwen finally knows the truth! :) And wow, Oliver DID have a good reason. Awesome chapter as always!

Love the direction the story is taking! Is Dr. McCoy taking Polyjuice Potion? And I get the feeling that Kingsley knows that Tonks has kept a record of her notes...