A fun story. I loved the way that you tied the two story lines together, though I did feel like O'Neal should have gotten a clue sooner. If people often try to steal Daniel, shouldn't O'Neal always have a concealed-carry weapon?

I really, really enjoyed this! You wrote this so well, even if I never seen Stargate I felt as though I ddin't need too.

this story is utterly awesome. but you totally had me at the poster. I couldn't stop laughing for a whole minute. love this fic - two of my fav shows!

OMG! This fic totally rocks! Thanks for writing this! It made my day :D

I really love this story. In fact, I love all your stories and hoped you would continue to write EE fic. Any chance you'll be writing some more?

like it? i loved it

Fantastic, liked the addition of Cade.

Get more chapters or fics out.

Cool. Very cool.

I LOVE your story :). Its one of the best crossovers I've read in a while (I read one a day ago that was a bad mix of EE, SG1 and Charmed) Anyway, your story was brilliant, once I started reading it I couldnt stop, went to bed at 02:25am because I stayed up to read your story.

Congrates on a perfect piece of writting :)

I positively love this story, but I have a complaint to make: you've gotten me hooked on Stargate SG-1. *grin* I had never even heard of it before I read this story, and now I'm an addict! Help!

I'm new to and just discovered this story. Wonderful job with the Early Edition and Stargate characters! And wonderful job blending the two universes so seemlessly.
Can't wait to read your other stories.

::applauds wildly:: I've never seen Stargate before, but your writing was so good it just didn't matter. Now I'm kind of interested in seeing that show...only I don't know when it comes on...

Anyway, the best part of it all is your incredible devotion to detail and canon aspects. That's not only rare but rarely well done, and here, I couldn't stop reading! For one thing, you have wonderfully clever, constant humor, and a sense of realism in the stories.

"Then let me show you my favorite haunts for a couple of days," he offered, " then I'll go molest my fish and you can go admire your rocks."

"Artifacts, Jack. Artifacts."

::grin:: I think that's what hooked my interest for some reason. And it gave some insight into their character personalities...

Wow. You have so much knowledge about Early Edition. I haven't really seen the show in a few years since it got moved to cable.

I liked how Gary met Jack and Daniel. What a way to get off on a suspicious foot. And the way "Number One" kept sighing over the museum plan. The contrast of seriousness of taking your kid to visit but not being able to because you're about to make it a death scene.

The roll of pennies! LOL! I loved it! Very creative instead of having him just throw himself at the guy with the gun. Smarter, too.

"Artifacts, Jack," Daniel groaned. "They're called artifacts!" Hehe, reoccuring themes. I *really* love this fic.

Hm. I thought Jack was going to avoid the room housing replicas of Egyptian sarcophagi? Then why did he move toward it?

I was grinning almost the entire time I was reading this fic, but When Jack was getting information on Gary from General Hammond, I was really cracking up. (But...some of the stuff I don't remember and probably never saw...)

"Strange man," O'Neill muttered. "Very strange."

::grin:: Yeah, that's Gary in a nutshell. But in a good way...

Wow. He told Cade Foster about the paper...

Poor Gary...that guy needs a break. Or at least a good celestial lawyer.

"For the cat to get his act together."

Silence. Then...

"Gary?"

"Yeah, Daniel?"

"That made absolutely no sense whatsoever."

"Yeah. I know. You'll get used to it."

I *loved* that scene. Just had to let you know. And love that Cat.

"The guy was a little taller than he thought. When the MALP trundled through the event horizon, the first thing it recorded was a wide-eyed, slack jawed Apophis...with Gary's right foot planted firmly in his groin." Okay, I have no idea what a MALP or Apophis is, but...that was still a really cool scene. Go Gar!

And the ending was great. Good to be home indeed. ~Michelle

WOW!

This was great! That was really great! The only thing that might have been helped was how long it was. It would've been a bit more manageable if you had set the sections up as different chapters, but this was really great! I hope you get more reviews of it!

I really enjoyed this story! Wow, it was just great. Loved it, loved it, loved it! Your Gary was great, your O'Neil perfect. Gave me happy thoughts, it did. Thank you for writing it and sharing it!

Great story. had everything, action, drama, a bit of humor, and a tiny hint of romance.