| Reviews for The Unknown Power |
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G chapter 5 . 9/12/2013 I tried finding this story on your site but couldn't. Super disappointed. Oh well. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2013 I love this story and how the chapters are really long . I also must say that I'm impressed how you have the personalities down for the characters. Thanx for writing it :) |
xxnarufanxx chapter 2 . 3/19/2011 wondeful oneshot" really enjoyed reading it |
Hayley chapter 3 . 8/4/2007 THIS STORY IS SO COOL! i like Harry Potter so much and tour story is just as good as the real book Excellent work. I love the relationship so far with Harry and Ginny and also the mystery with Ron and Hermione's relationship. I havent read all of this story so i dont know whats going to happen with Ron and Hermione. I HOPE ITS GOOD. :) Congrats. C YA |
No.names.availible chapter 5 . 6/25/2005 I was very close to leaving myself, but I am not a real 'dedicated author' (although the songlyric ban pissed me off something fierce!) so I just come for the large amount of HP fanfiction. Great work so far. I love it. *skips off to read next part* -exile |
cronenus chapter 5 . 5/3/2005 thanks for letting all or us know and i agry with you i was going to start posting my first fanfic. on here but now i'm going to look some ware ells to post it. i like the story and have one thing to say i'm not werthy of reading such masterfull work that you have deemed to let us read, and so not to miss read any of it i let my computer convert it to speech so that i can enjoy every splended word. now that thats said are you going to kech the storys up on pheonex song? _. |
Ugly Duckling chapter 3 . 4/27/2005 Please don't tell me... "Dark Lady Bellatrix"! |
Ugly Duckling chapter 2 . 4/27/2005 Ghostbusters - "We'll cross the streams"...! |
madbrad chapter 4 . 4/27/2005 I've been enjoying this story! Sometimes it reads like a Jeconais story (which is a good thing, of course) with your Harry/Ginny repartee and romantic moments. Bit surprised that you made a point of having Harry actually be *inferior* in duelling abilities to Remus, but that's realistic I guess. The dance with Tonks was very nice/good ... I remember you posting a bit from that in Jeconais's group. Yes, dancing with the 'real' Tonks was a noble and warm gesture. For me, for some reason, my favourite sentence was Bill coming out of the bathroom "just in time to see Ginny enter the room and curl up on the bed as if it was the most natural thing in the world to do". I don't know why, but that image of Ginny 'curling up on the bed', at that place in the story - with all the H/G interaction prior - just stuck in my head. I'm glad that you're keeping the couple chaste up to now - it befits their innocence, dignity and 'nobility', I don't know how else to express it - but it's amusing that the rest of Ginny's family think that she and Harry are making love. A little bit worrying, too ... if I'm feeling good about the two of them waiting for the right time, I'd honestly feel better if Mr. Weasley and the others knew too. I have a little grungy feeling that Mr. Weasley at least thinks, at least a bit, that Harry has let him down. There's nothing wrong with being a horse! Thanks for the fun so far. Brad. |
rdprice29 chapter 2 . 4/26/2005 For some unknown reason, I avoided starting your story when it was publicized on Jeconais' yahoo group. However, I AM REALLY ENJOYING IT! I love the humour that you are threading throughout the story, and even Harry's strained relationship with Dumbledore, which I think is believable, considering the circumstances they ended OotP on. Great job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! Rachael |
JagedlyJaded2 chapter 4 . 4/26/2005 I just LOVE this story. I only started to read this story because of your a different timeline story. Kind of wish you created a story similiar to that but not a one shot :) I love your constant updates. I don't mind the long chapters because of the constant updates :) |
Bloodless Ace chapter 4 . 4/26/2005 great chapter and story. |
aryell chapter 4 . 4/26/2005 Great story, can you update? Cant wait till next one/ |
captuniv chapter 4 . 4/25/2005 Another great chapter Crys! Liked the Yule Ball, great name for the group. That went well and the train ride back to London was fun. I really liked the way Gred and Forge came out on Harry and Ginny's side and gave their blessing. Of course, as the resident troublemakers, they would plus considering everything Harry's done for them and the Wizarding World in general I'm betting they feel there wouldn't be anyone better to trust with Ginny. Sometimes I think they see things more clearly than many others do. The parties at Potter Manor were fun and I look forward to the New Years Eve party and what may come up. Why do I have a feeling that something big is going to happen? Very nice that Mr. Weasley is in favor of Ginny and Harry, but it must have been a struggle for him when he discovered that book. Still, he does like Harry very much and probably sees things much like the Twins. Ron really has to get over his overprotectiveness of Ginny, but he'll probably need to be hit over the head a few more times. Molly will probably always see Ginny as her little girl and it will take a lot to get her to accept the fact that she's growing up and starting a relationship. But seeing as it's with Harry, that will be the only thing that will help. She's probably heard Ginny talk about her crush on Harry for years and will have to accept the fact that Harry is returning those feelings. The training is cool and I never would have seen Harry as an Equine either. Would have expected some type of bird with his love of flying. Hmm, wonder exactly what kind of equine he will become? Looking forward to the next installment! |
LiLy MaLfOy13 chapter 4 . 4/25/2005 love your story it is really good |