A great story. Very well written.

Hilarious story! I loved it, especially the race, and the snowball fight, and the hiding of the pack and weaponry ... I've just realised that I've mentioned pretty much the entire story - never mind! Anyway, I really loved it, and the characters were very realistic.

Thanks foo writing!

Yah! *cheers then stops because she can't stop laughing* MORE! Will u write another please *begs* I loved it, it was just wat i needed after reading this horribly frighting story *shudders* I love your fic!

(giggle) I loved it! Very cute. You had me in stitches when Elladan went "Oh, Estel..." in that saintly voice of his. I could just picture it all so clearly. This is the best human fic I've ever read! I loved having Ran and Trey in it too, it's been ages since Cassia and Siobhan have written any Mellon Chronicle stories.

Love Randa*

What a cute little story! It was well written and all of the characters were very life like. I could see the action taking place in my mind's eye. Very well done!