I really like how you putted the love/hate thing... and the ending was made of win. Nice! It really is for your first fic, keep on writing

Short and sweet brotherly love. I love it.

Loved teh ending _

the last line was very funny. hehe. anyway, your fic is well written; i liked your style and it was quite apparent how the unending cycle works. it was short, though. well keep up!

Wow! Coolie! I like Virgil/Dante pairings. I hope you'll write more..._

I love DMC and I love yaoi so I absolutely love the Dante/Vergil pairing *jumps for joy* This is extremely good for your first fic. Please say there will be a sequel. *puppy face*

I love DMC and I love yaoi so I absolutely love the Dante/Vergil pairing *jumps for joy* This is extremely good for your first fic. Please say there will be a sequel. *puppy face*

Wow! I love it very much! So sweet! _

I abolsutely loves yaoi/slash fics! yay!

wow coolness!

_ WOW! I like this! w

I like Vergil / Dante! XD hahaha!

will it have a continue part of this? I want to read more x

*sque* i likes too!

why does everyone say be nice when its their first time fanficcing? Come on we're not going to bite! Just keep writing and pretty soon youll have your own praises and flames. As far as this goes. It's quite good for your first time. See? We didnt bite now did we?

I liked this very much - and you know, I can't even say for sure why, and I'd have liked to give a run down on everything I liked about it. Let's see...

Your observations, the way you set up the scene, the repetition is good and effective, and your description is wonderful.

The only negative quality was that the end seemed rather rushed. But then, even that sort of suits the fic.

Well done!