Reviews for Tory's Redemption
MungoJerry chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
:3 Pr... Prai-sed Be! Although this isn't too much a fanfiction. XD Lovely description, especially with the snow falling into the water.
K. Pepper chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
As a born-again Christian, this short little fanfic really meant a lot to me. I know someone who feels that way, and my prayers have always gone out to him, but he refuses to listen… Thank you for posting this story. It was beautifully written and meaningful, and I admit… it made me cry. Thank you for being willing to talk about your faith to everyone, and for letting people know what you believe. It’s so hard sometimes. This could mean everything to somebody. Just remember that. And never apologize for your faith.

-Ri
NotJim chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
well... nothing to do with MMBN... but a fine story nonetheless.
InnocentChibi chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
I don't log on for nearly a week and I miss everything! O.O Great fic though! Too bad it's a one shot. It would've been fun to read more.
Iniora Nackatori chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Well... for not having anything to do with Mega (yet, I'm asuming), it was a great start. Extreamly interesting. Should be a fun read when it gets to full swing.

Till next chapter, this is Iniora Nackatori, signing off!
PRIVATE chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
I don't care if it's not a megaman fic, but I thought this was pretty good! They have a site for this type of stories but because this site won't let me write it down, I'll just put spaces between the letters.

w w w . . c o m
LazerWulf chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
So you did end up putting Tory's name in the title. It helps.

I can't help but picture Maylu as the Homecoming Queen, and Lan as her "companion".

Remembering about the watch sounds like her.

Phila-Del-Phia!

LazerWulf
Youshou Leviathan chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
This is a good one, adn I'm teh second to review! yay! Anyway, as for Jill, your classmate last year committed SUICIDE? So sad... I know a kid in this class that is now an adult that killed the class's pet mice with a paper cutter. It was terrible from what I heard. He cut the poor mice's heads off with the paper cutter! NO! Anyway, nice fic... okay, let's not talk about dead people now.
Jill chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Hey! Great story! This really hit home, one of my class mates committed suicde last year. So, yeah. Good bye for now.